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Decent grammar and spelling. Well put together characters, even if they are suppose to be 2d characters. Well integrated plot.

"and will never meet yourself or change your past." Means you yourself has already met your first love and already lived that life, you cannot live it again. Unless you want to be a voyeur and just watch yourself from a distance? Everyone seems to like to overcomplicate things with talking...

As a reader, as soon as possible. As a human being, as soon as... No go with your schedule and build up some buffer if you can for the days when you cannot write and post on time.

Will you? How do you know this? maybe you are already part of the time line and just do not know it yet. But yes this!

FYI, if I did not make it clear you are not going back into your own body. You are going back to some point in time, your choice, at the age you want to be, again your choice, but you will never meet yourself at any point in that timeline. So you are not the past you but the future you at some...

I wrote another chapter in a novel I am aiming not to write, but it keeps writing itself. My wife is entertained, and a really critical editor. But it gave a warm fuzzy feeling when that chapter was done.

If you could go back in time to one point in time and live from there. With the following caveats, you cannot change the progress of the timeline that has already been written (No killing Hitler, no stopping Covid-19) and will never meet yourself or change your past. You will arrive at the time...

Tags>Synopsis>1st chapter>Title>Art. If anything the only thing a title can do for me is turn me off immediately when it is an obvious turn off for a story type.

Just a re-write for my own purposes. Chapter 1: Of Blue Mountains and Dust Mnemonic, start journal program. Testing, testing, 1 2 3. Heh this works! Umm delete that. Go back? Sighs. Right, I’ll fix it later. Journal Entry #1 Date December 25th, 2040 Blue Ridge Mountains Refugee Center #42...

Very, Especially if you clone someone without their knowledge and now have their "body" for all intents and purposes for spell casting on to affect their actual body. Depending on system used, it would make it easier to control them mind body and soul as it were. Oh and to the above the XP...

Oh I knew which castle it was. Part of why the wishful thinking about touring it.

One day I would love to take a tour of the castle in your second picture. But yeah from the title alone the second picture works.

I dislike the ones that are abusive, which regretfully seems to be most of them. Sorry but I long left the woman beating on man is funny a long time ago. Oh wait, never thought that was funny from the very first JP anime I ever saw, looking at you Rumiko Takahashi author of Urusei Yatsura. She...

My Snark vote aside. https://www.uwinnipeg.ca/alumni/news-accomplishments/alumni-authors.html https://www.amazon.com/Put-Armour-Light-Catherine-Macdonald/dp/1459715497https://www.goodreads.com/places/3455-winnipeg-manitoba

PUDDLE STOMP!

1. Divine EXP Boost. Grants a x50 EXP multiplier, allows to regain lifespan and a middle age appearance at high level. Tempting, depends on HOW you gain XP and what the leveling set points are. If you cannot gain enough XP no matter what in that 1 month, kind of not worth it. If you can...

Tags are what I search by. Titles can lose my interest if they are obnoxious. The synopsis can hook me in or make me skip right then and there. The writing in the chapters is what will keep me around. I do not care about the cover as much but it does help/hurt alongside the title, more it may...

He is not wrong entirely, just he will have to hope the other guy is also untrained and unarmed. You can hit/stab someone with a sword untrained, you just won't get as good of an effect as even minimal training on how to hold and swing a sword would give you. And yes you a danger to yourself. :)

Even Superman's "X-Ray" vision does not work the same as real X-Rays do. Since X-Rays work by sending X-Rays through an object and having a plate that records the change in the X-rays, due to moving through different densities, on the other side to see what is inside of what you are scanning...

Did not want to do the math, to tired, and hand wavium worked in this case. Just wanted to demonstrate the issue.