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I have some issues towards the concept of a brown elf being labelled a dark elf and then attributed with dark magic, for fantasy racial reasons, instead a fresh take I have never seen and will implement in my story is a dark elf who is white! *Gasp* Instead elves would be labelled as wood, dark...

I would say a simple spell a magic barrier, the dome or square kind simple, practical and can be very useful, in combat and simple survival situations creating a protective dome while you rest, or a square platform to step on in a fight all it needs is a ittle imagination, hell it can even be a...

This is the tree I've gone with, you don't necessarily have to, I've started with a goblin as the base of all race's variants based on environment would only look different because of the inherent skills they'd gained from adapting in said environments. And a basic evolution tree, of [1] goblin...

Well, then a good thing I decided to check in here is my submissions go as hard and fair as you can. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1112997/a-tamers-adventure/

It's alright man hoping your business went well. You still got to it and that's all that mattered. Thanks for the review glad the slightly slow pacing isn't a huge takeaway away, I'm also not sure what the standard for smut is but I've been told by Corty in another review the important aspect...

Giving an unreasonable power-up with no prior build-up. I've read stories where the Mc struggles and suddenly because of the plot gets some bullshit powerup with no build-up or mentioning that makes him overcome the situation, like where did it come from? You never even hinted at a power within...

I have trudged through my findings as have the other scholars presenting you with their creations, my various records of the madness of this world may but be a drop of sand. But it bears a sense of captivity, bear witness to this scholars work...

I'll happily take your review if you have the time. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1112997/a-tamers-adventure/

Oh well, thanks for letting me know.

I'd like a review if you have the time, private message please. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1112997/a-tamers-adventure/

I think this is where we have to look at the tags we put on our stories, specific groups of readers always search for certain tags they want when looking for something to read and through that is how we try and draw in our target audience, which is why we should be mindful of the tags we put on...

First of all, thank you so much I've been waiting for a critique and dont worry about being nitpicky I enjoyed it. And it helped as I feel other readers feel the same and this'll help me write better. I did not know how much went into writing.:blob_aww: Thank you for saying I'm decent at...

Yeah I wasn't sure where to post this and decided to get a reader and author perspective.

This is a simple question but one that demands extra thought if needed and it's simple what number do you consider a small harem? I believe anything between more than three is a small large harem, as there is no conventional standard for medium-sized harems, just a big or a small one. So how...

I'll happily take any feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1112997/a-tamers-adventure/

I shall partake in your kindness, sir. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1112997-a-tamers-adventure/chapter/1112999/

If I get the buffs I made for full souls transferring into the world and not just washed souls then yeah.

I have come to vent *jumps in a vent* Alright with that out the way I don't have a lot of peeves but one I do is when a reader comments on someone else enjoying the story and telling them this is stupid or that they shouldn't read this. Like what's the point? He didn't ask for your opinion? And...

Got it here it is. Thank you in advance. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1112997/a-tamers-adventure/

Sorry, I'm not sure if you checking others and don't want to sound annoying, I'd appreciate your honest thoughts on what I can improve.