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Aww well thank you for putting the time to read even though you dislike reading! And haha fair. If I will be honest, writing the part about the station was my least favorite part to write in the chapter ?‍♀️ so... I'm not really sure how to make that part better.

Thank you! I try my best (not really I'm actually really lazy when I draw most of the time but still thanks!) Aww thanks, glad I can inspire you.

Thanks they were a lot of fun.

I meant to draw characters for my current story Lucky God System, but got distracted drawing characters from other stories I plan to write in the future isntead. ? Ps. The Great Amigo is my online artist name, which is why it's written on some of them.

Oh dang thanks for letting me know, I hadn't noticed I accidentally posted chapter 2 twice ? it should be fixed now. And also thanks for your feedback, I really appreciate it.

There's so many types I like. But I do enjoy MC's who choose to be kind people when they had every reason not to be. I don't mean MCs who are pushovers. I mean legitimately kind. They had times where they nearly decided to give into their anger and misery, but they still decided to keep being...

For me it's harem or female characters in general who were obviously just there to be eye candy. Like they don't act like real women at all. It irritates when I reading a book or watching a show where a bunch of women are fighting for an absolute loser of an MC ? Oh and also the indecisive mc...

To be honest I think even with stories I really liked if it included something I hated, I'd drop it after awhile even if I try to keep reading for a few chapters. I'm not a personal fan or harems or stories where the MC's female companion is simply just there for the sake of sex appeal or...

As long as it matches the characters personality and is appropriate for what the setting is. I don't see a problem. I write characters who cry all the time. It's realistic. Even if the characters are guys. I'm probably in a minority but I grew up in a family with a very emotionally sensitive...

Plenty. Several of my characters curse or use profanity. I do not in real life. Have characters who are are part of religions I'm don't believe in. Or several who don't believe in God, but I do. Plenty of characters, especially my villains who say tons of things I don't believe in. I have a...

I see I'll have look into how I write them at the police station ? yeah, AI helps me a lot with grammar and sentence structure. But it's not helpful when it comes emotional stuff. Which is why I'd really love more human feedback. But thank you! I did some editing on my dialogue. I hope I fixed...

Well my Well there isn't much as far as numbers for first or second chapter. My main character doesn't get his system until chapter 6. I'll try to work on descriptions and settings. I've been told in the past that my lack of descriptions and settings sometimes makes is hard to follow. Could...

I'd love to get some feedback on my story Lucky God System. I wanted to try writing a LITRPG with a system and put my own spin on the genre. I find the concept really interesting, but it’s often written poorly or filled with tropes I dislike. It would just mean a lot to get feedback from...

I feel like I should be more specific. I don’t plan to make the training arc last for a long time. It will be just one to three chapters at most, and even then, it will be mixed with other plot points. Also, when I say “training,” I don’t mean he’s going to bulk up or do intense workouts. He’s...

Though it’s possible, on sites popular with light novel readers, those kinds of stories typically aren’t what the audience is looking for. How should I put it? ? It’s kind of like people who enjoy watching Hallmark movies over and over again, just in a different font. They like reading stories...

Hmm, I might not be able to use a romance subplot. Although my story will have some romance eventually, none of my main character's potential love interests have been introduced yet and they won't be for awhile? but perhaps something else could do the trick. Maybe some stuff with my side characters?

Thank you, that's actually pretty solid advice. ?

Generally, I think it's important for the characters to have a real connection of some kind. Don't just have them say "I love you" show the small intimate actions they do for the other person. If you're taking the slow route, you want your readers shipping them long before either of them notice...