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both first images are good.

Absolutely. Actually, your story idea is good, but the delivery on the chapter needs improvement. To gather more views, interesting cover needed since your story actually not popular genre on SH.

Hmm, i read chapter 1, but i don't know why it feels like fell flat mate. I'm very easy person to be impressed, but this time, I didn't even catch the interesting plot. Also, I recommend you to change cover too, to make it more interesting.

Your explanation almost close to my initial concept of Voidmeister. Because the stances and movements are adapting from what i learned on Kyokushin (Karate) and Taijiquan's principles.

Since I'm still writing Dark Fantasy, I will say : our current reality is already cruel enough, you just need to applied it in the Fantasy World. And... Viola! You got Dark Fantasy you're looking for! :blob_sir:

Care to share the complete one? I bet others might be interested to listen your stories.

Well, better use your own 'voice' thou. Limited vocabulary is not an issue, as long as for communication purpose (not writing).

All of it already shown at previous chapters. That's why I wasn't asking about whether this technique suitable for MC or not. I already plotted everything from beginning until the end of the book. :blob_okay: I asked whether the narrative about the technique mechanism easy to understand or not...

That's the foreshadowing of his origin, it was intentional that I didn't explicitly explain the natural part of his ability, since I avoid the OP MC scenarios. :sweat_smile: That's why I focused on the current narrative, I want the technical part of Voidmeister mechanism delivered to the reader.

the first chapter is very interesting, personally i like it. As Grimdark and Psychological horror writer, your narrative is very good, the 'grim' delivered good enough. I might read it further, but as i noticed there's a 'futanari' tag, i'll stop at chapter 1. Good luck on your writing mate!

I love Janett persona :blobrofl: :blobrofl: :blobrofl: :blobrofl:

Well, actually my MC is the only non-magic and non-aura user fighting in the world full of magic and auras, :blobrofl: :blobrofl: My style of action is more technical i guess. I like detailed scene, its combination of anime like fight and real life technical. Let me give you example : MC vs...

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What the!!! Dude! this is DOPE! You draw this just for couple of hours? Man, your talent is insane!

Then if you don't mind, please visualize this one. Moon-lurker is werewolf creature. As for Ramond, he looks like this :

What kind of story that you considered as bad for academy arc?

Damn! That's super cool mate! So many talented artists here!

based on his movement, Jotaro will use side kick with his right foot? and synn will block it with his right leg?

careful, last time i posted something like this, the post being flagged and removed, :blobrofl: :blobrofl: :blobrofl: