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Yup. That's yugioh. Just, just like the anime!

In school I got in to like two fights per grade, and I thank God that I never really hurt from them.

Thanks yous.

Bustline: The story of Ruth Raven. As for what I liked about your story, the accuracy of the bear part. With the whole raising of his arms and whatnot.

I feel that you need to work on... wording. Use less I's and break up your sentences more. It almost feels like your character is throwing up his thoughts and actions. Try to avoid several sentences that start with I in a row and spread out your I's.

Sure, what's the name of your story?

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Please, tell me your thoughts. A thousand flickering lights passed me by. They danced all across the room, going from wall to wall. It was a beautiful sight that held me hypnotized. I could not look away, I lacked both the will and desire. So for a few moments more I stared on. The lights, a...

Thanks (imagine a thumbs up right here instead of these words.)

Please, go on.

Tell me what ya think please. The floor did not make for a good resting place. It was hard, made of stone, and nowhere near as comfortable as my bed. And whatever was laying on top of me made sleeping even worse. I was almost too glad to be rid of it. Then I opened my eyes and discovered the...

Strategy, I like strategy.

Ever heard of shushybye?

I'm curious as to what you mean by this.

Could you perhaps elaborate further?

I'm gonna write a(nother) story about a character with a unrealistically bottom heavy figure, and was wondering if anyone could help me come up with a plot.

Yes.

I need help deciding on what I wanna write next.