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  1. Ai-chan

    Not if they're speaking Japanese, but if they're saying English, it would be. [MEDIA] Well...

    Not if they're speaking Japanese, but if they're saying English, it would be. Well, she's Korean but Japanese do that too, to the point that Saki-chan from Saki Channel wouldn't say Coke and would instead say Coca Cola because she wasn't confident with her pronunciation.
  2. Ai-chan

    Need feedback on a story pls

    Glad you're open to improvements. About the name, the problem is not the name itself. You can name it Project Holy Titties and nobody would care much. The problem is you said it too many times in a single chapter. You have to reduce the instances of it being mentioned. From a single quick sweep...
  3. Ai-chan

    Did you know that Japanese people pronounce Coke as Cock? Imagine how "Please give me coke." sounds.

    Did you know that Japanese people pronounce Coke as Cock? Imagine how "Please give me coke." sounds.
  4. Ai-chan

    How to create a plot?

    Ai-chan can't create a plot for you when Ai-chan doesn't even know what you want to write. However, for other things such as deciding on the setting, the characters and the names, Ai-chan programmed an HTML program for that that you can open on the browser. If you're interested, tell Ai-chan...
  5. Ai-chan

    Which one

    Whenever people say immortal genre, Ai-chan assume they would mean the immortals that live on the floating mountain of Zu, or Hua, or Huang. Nobody writes about the Persian Immortals. And nobody would refer to the demigods of Classical Greece and Ancient Egypt by 'immortal'. The 'highlanders' in...
  6. Ai-chan

    Which one

    This question cannot be answered properly without knowing your level of skills and your method of writing. Some authors can even turn a talking wall into something interesting. Heck, The Brother's Grimm managed to make a talking mirror interesting, from an originally droll story. From Ai-chan's...
  7. Ai-chan

    Please give a feedback on my synopsis.

    Yeah, what they said, it's too long. Basically, think of it as the back of the book. If your synopsis can't fit the back of the book, it's too long. Here's Ai-chan's correction, you can use it or you can continue to change it. Ai-chan doesn't know what you want to do with your story. You also...
  8. Ai-chan

    Which is better?

    Wattpad has seen some success stories where some stories have been adapted into paperbacks and movies. Supposedly it also has licensing deals with book publishers, but that's about it.
  9. Ai-chan

    How to write accent?

    Ya gotta naw der accent fer ya can rite it, ya ken? Ain't nobody got time fo' dat!
  10. Ai-chan

    My new and improved first chapter, need feedback though.

    Aren't you overestimating the attention span and focus of a 7 year old?
  11. Ai-chan

    Not lewd enough. [IMG]

    Not lewd enough.
  12. Ai-chan

    The absolute state of Scribble Hub

    Ai-chan doesn't exactly remember. It had rape, blasphemy, death cult and fantasy creatures. Ai-chan was so angry, Ai-chan deleted every instance of the story from Ai-chan's computer.
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    The absolute state of Scribble Hub

    Ah, that place. Ai-chan wrote there like over 10 years ago. Ai-chan was accused of being a lunatic bigot who should be arrested, executed and burned in Hell. One comment even said he/she pray to God that Ai-chan's mother and sisters are raped and killed for Ai-chan's sins. Ai-chan deleted the...
  14. Ai-chan

    Parental guardian, please help

    You should tell your aunt that you're gay. And you've been looking at gay porn and dudes doing animals. She won't dare open the history.
  15. Ai-chan

    The dreaded Rape tag

    Is it portrayed? Yes. Is it implied? No, unless you're expecting squeamish readers.
  16. Ai-chan

    Let's talk fantasy cavalry

    Yes, but if the army rides a robot horse, that's not what we would call fantasy. We'd call that sci-fi. Let's not get out of topic. Otherwise we can argue that riding a spaceship or starfighter can also be considered cavalry. fantasy /ˈfantəsi,ˈfantəzi/ noun noun: fantasy 1. the faculty or...
  17. Ai-chan

    Let's talk fantasy cavalry

    It would have to be big, though. And the head would have to be armoured too, otherwise, it won't function as a tank, which would be its only existence for being used as a mount. Calvary means church though... Giant insects are an interesting option. If a person has the ability to spread...
  18. Ai-chan

    Let's talk fantasy cavalry

    Everyone knows of horse cavalries, right? Did you know that there are also goat cavalries and elephant cavalries? Yes, people actually rode goats in real life, but not into battle. That part is entirely Tolkien. But the idea itself is sound, assuming your goats are huge and your legs are...
  19. Ai-chan

    Writing as a Job

    Yes. Already discussed with a site about writing for money. Unfortunately, Ai-chan needs to finish a new book first before Ai-chan can make use of that negotiation. And no, it's not webnovel, cloud something or whatever else would contact you out of the blue offering a contract. It's a proper...
  20. Ai-chan

    How to make memorable characters with these archetypes?

    From top to bottom: 1. Relatable (as in the reader can relate to his personality and his background) 2. Uniqueness (as in you can practically count on your fingers what other characters can be mistaken for this character) 3. Logical (as in his actions is logical as if he's a real person) 4...
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