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Glad you're open to improvements. About the name, the problem is not the name itself. You can name it Project Holy Titties and nobody would care much. The problem is you said it too many times in a single chapter. You have to reduce the instances of it being mentioned. From a single quick sweep...

Did you know that Japanese people pronounce Coke as Cock? Imagine how "Please give me coke." sounds.

Ai-chan can't create a plot for you when Ai-chan doesn't even know what you want to write. However, for other things such as deciding on the setting, the characters and the names, Ai-chan programmed an HTML program for that that you can open on the browser. If you're interested, tell Ai-chan...

Whenever people say immortal genre, Ai-chan assume they would mean the immortals that live on the floating mountain of Zu, or Hua, or Huang. Nobody writes about the Persian Immortals. And nobody would refer to the demigods of Classical Greece and Ancient Egypt by 'immortal'. The 'highlanders' in...

This question cannot be answered properly without knowing your level of skills and your method of writing. Some authors can even turn a talking wall into something interesting. Heck, The Brother's Grimm managed to make a talking mirror interesting, from an originally droll story. From Ai-chan's...

Yeah, what they said, it's too long. Basically, think of it as the back of the book. If your synopsis can't fit the back of the book, it's too long. Here's Ai-chan's correction, you can use it or you can continue to change it. Ai-chan doesn't know what you want to do with your story. You also...

Wattpad has seen some success stories where some stories have been adapted into paperbacks and movies. Supposedly it also has licensing deals with book publishers, but that's about it.

Ya gotta naw der accent fer ya can rite it, ya ken? Ain't nobody got time fo' dat!

Aren't you overestimating the attention span and focus of a 7 year old?

Ai-chan doesn't exactly remember. It had rape, blasphemy, death cult and fantasy creatures. Ai-chan was so angry, Ai-chan deleted every instance of the story from Ai-chan's computer.

Ah, that place. Ai-chan wrote there like over 10 years ago. Ai-chan was accused of being a lunatic bigot who should be arrested, executed and burned in Hell. One comment even said he/she pray to God that Ai-chan's mother and sisters are raped and killed for Ai-chan's sins. Ai-chan deleted the...

You should tell your aunt that you're gay. And you've been looking at gay porn and dudes doing animals. She won't dare open the history.

Is it portrayed? Yes. Is it implied? No, unless you're expecting squeamish readers.

Yes, but if the army rides a robot horse, that's not what we would call fantasy. We'd call that sci-fi. Let's not get out of topic. Otherwise we can argue that riding a spaceship or starfighter can also be considered cavalry. fantasy /ˈfantəsi,ˈfantəzi/ noun noun: fantasy 1. the faculty or...

It would have to be big, though. And the head would have to be armoured too, otherwise, it won't function as a tank, which would be its only existence for being used as a mount. Calvary means church though... Giant insects are an interesting option. If a person has the ability to spread...

Everyone knows of horse cavalries, right? Did you know that there are also goat cavalries and elephant cavalries? Yes, people actually rode goats in real life, but not into battle. That part is entirely Tolkien. But the idea itself is sound, assuming your goats are huge and your legs are...

Yes. Already discussed with a site about writing for money. Unfortunately, Ai-chan needs to finish a new book first before Ai-chan can make use of that negotiation. And no, it's not webnovel, cloud something or whatever else would contact you out of the blue offering a contract. It's a proper...

From top to bottom: 1. Relatable (as in the reader can relate to his personality and his background) 2. Uniqueness (as in you can practically count on your fingers what other characters can be mistaken for this character) 3. Logical (as in his actions is logical as if he's a real person) 4...