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    Writing Prompt Give your MC a "reason you suck" speech

    Yeah which is why I had the bro character (of all people) punch him out for it. Had a good time playing around with a slight bit of subversion and meta commentary.
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    Writing Prompt Give your MC a "reason you suck" speech

    I'm not sure if this counts, but this is an excerpt from my second volume. Pretty long like most of the stuff I've written so I'll spoiler tag it. It's not a full "speech" per se, but more of an extended sequence where the Mandatory Goofy Bro in a Harem-y Show ™ loses it on the protag. Probably...
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    Feedback + suggestions (Closed)

    To be fair, I also did the wait and see approach. Not the 3 weeks thing, but the actual content. Then I saw how detailed you were and felt that you could also understand the type of stuff I was writing, so I gave it a shot. You blew my expectations away, tbh. It's always gonna be a single...
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    Which element do you like the most in the story?

    I like characters. I enjoy a story far more the more vividly I can visualize them and "read their lines voiced" in my head. If I can have a clear picture of what they look like and what they sound like, every piece of dialogue becomes a lot more immersive for me. That's also why I lean more...
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    Sunset's Art Thread?

    Trying to make an action shot from way back, WIP
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    Silvoid Mediocre Art

    That's still a wip? It's the perfect type of coloring for my tastes already. Hoping to see an even more completed version.
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    Looking for Things to Review

    Yeah. I was using the Japanese text for a not-so literal translation Awakener's Pact, the title. Although it's written as "Awakened" in Japanese. But in the cover here, it says Awakener's Awakener :blobrofl: It's great you posted the vid though because I found the problem and fixed it now.
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    What to do with my ever increasing hate on silent readers

    I think most of us like the comments, reactions, and such. It's just that there's really nothing we can do about it. No offense intended, but "waging a war on silent readers" or intentionally trying to manipulate them into commenting (as I've seen in the thread) kinda leaves a bad impression...
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    Does anyone here play GACHA games?

    Speaking of AL, I never played it, but I like Belfast
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    Looking for Things to Review

    I didn't expect to be there lol. Thanks for the shoutout. Although it's now that I noticed I posted the wrong cover here :sweating_profusely: Only with regards to the Japanese text though.
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    Long Silver-haired Anime Waifus

    ??? On another note, I think I'm in the minority who likes her Devil form the least. I always liked the AST armor and Angel more in terms of aesthetics. Although only her Devil form qualifies for the thread. That, and the white Nepgear that appeared for one volume. My favorite Origami moment...
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    Long Silver-haired Anime Waifus

    Man of culture Origami really grew on me in seasons 2 and 3. Alisa's my fave in CS, but Fie's cool too :blob_evil_two: Love her CS2 attire the most.
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    How much have you written?

    My statistics say 278k words, so there's that. If you include the drafts and all the other stuff I've helped write or edit, it will probably push the count to 300k
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    Does anyone here play GACHA games?

    I play Princess Connect Redive. Favorite girls include Yui, Rei, Nozomi, Kuka, and Suzuna. For Bang Dream Girls Band Party, Yukina, Himari, and Rinko are my faves. I don't play Genshin, but judging from the designs, I'm leaning towards Jean, Eula, Raiden, Rosaria, and Hu Tao. I also play a...
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