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  1. L1aei

    Infuriating things

    100% bro.
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    :blob_happy:
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    Because I would've liked and laughed twice for you. :blob_wink:
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    THIS! ?
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    That would be helpful too. :blobthumbsup: Also, I'd give you a like, but... [IMG]

    That would be helpful too. :blobthumbsup: Also, I'd give you a like, but...
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    More like direction. I feel like I'm witnessing everything inside of a bubble and every...

    More like direction. I feel like I'm witnessing everything inside of a bubble and every explosive detail in the story is pushing me into another scene of action. Locations help, but for me, I need some attachment to hold onto until the bitter end of your grim-dark crossover. That better? Maybe...
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    If it wasn't, I wouldn't have read the whole thing. :sweat_smile: So, one of the major things I...

    If it wasn't, I wouldn't have read the whole thing. :sweat_smile: So, one of the major things I want to point out... how should I say this? We know this is all happening on the ground, but I don't feel grounded. Does that make sense?
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    Alright. Read it. Is there anything you would like for me to touch on in response? Including...

    Alright. Read it. Is there anything you would like for me to touch on in response? Including tone; if you're not interested in where I see improvements could be made, I won't mention them. :blobthumbsup:
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    I'll check it out. Thanks for the update! :blob_cookie:

    I'll check it out. Thanks for the update! :blob_cookie:
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    Writing Handling extremely sensitive subject matter in fiction... how?

    You are not wrong at all; it's a challenge, not a problem, and one I thought deserved to be addressed... respectfully. :blob_okay:
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    Quickly, I need a chapter title!

    The sexual inuendo from that one... Jesus. Yeah, I voted on the second one by default. You're gonna mislead readers if there isn't some sort of beef cake for them to drool over. :blob_sweat:
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    Writing Handling extremely sensitive subject matter in fiction... how?

    Yes, it does. That's good. So they ain't being direct witnesses of the act, you're taking the really graphic atrocity away from the protagonist; that includes the readers. That's definitely one way on how to handle it well. In my opinion, you've clarified that genre is the dictator over framing...
  14. L1aei

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    I wish you the best of luck and goodwill. :blob_salute:
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    Blamed? For that when there's evidence to prove otherwise? Okay, that would be more aligned with this thread, but, seriously, restraining order... When?
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    Okay, that had me blinking a few times until enough blood rushed to my head for some genuine mental gymnastics. That's criminal.
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    Yeah. :blob_sweat:
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    The micro-second drivers put on their turn signal before making that turn; especially if I am waiting to make a left at a T-section, expecting them to pass but they make that turn instead and I have to wait longer.
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    :blobrofl:

    :blobrofl:
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    Awesome! I'd say read the ones you already enjoy. They're fanfiction, so if you are into the...

    Awesome! I'd say read the ones you already enjoy. They're fanfiction, so if you are into the original material, maybe you'll get a kick out if it. If not, then it might make you shrug; it's your time, have fun with it. :blob_okay:
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