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Writing Progress: 83 chapters Word Count: 120974 Page Count: 608 Editing Progress: 40/83 chapters - Clarity Checks 23/83 chapters - Grammar and Punctuation Cover Art: Typography - 20% Concept - 100% Background - 20% Characters -15%

Writing Progress: 83 chapters Word Count: 120865 Page Count: 607 Editing Progress: 38/83 chapters - Clarity Checks 20/83 chapters - Grammar and Punctuation Cover Art: Typography - 20% Concept - 100% Background - 20% Characters -10% Writing Progress: 83 chapters Word Count: 120974 Page Count...

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Oh, my bad! It wasn't quite one, but it still surprised me to find the MC was a ghoul. It was novel that the girl wasn't the MC. I think it'd be more powerful if it was played up like he was a warrior who happened on the scene, and then we come to the conclusion that instead he's a...

Damn... *bright smiles* That's quite good! If you don't write it and run it on Scribblehub, you're a fool! <3 Do it! You have a great idea! I never would have thought coming at it from that angle, and the twist was sublime!

Btw, always looking for beta readers! Early on opinions. Oh sure, it's not 100% perfect yet, but that's what beta reading is all about! <3

Progress: 82 chapters Word Count: 119232 Page Count: 595 Editing Progress: 21/82 chapters Editors: Assurbanipal II, Trismegistus Shandy As the editing progress continues, the word count will decrease a bit. It will increase as I write more omake chapters. I intend to release a special...

His skin was deathly pale and sunken. His hair was wild, unkempt, and shoulder-length. Chorus lay on his stomach, curling his front claw into a circle

His skin was deathly pale. His cheeks were sunk in. His black hair was wild and unkempt, at shoulder length. Chorus lied on his stomach, his front claw curled into a circle Actually I meant his and not him. :3

Interesting concept. You do have an issue, though. You overuse 'him' sentences. It'd be best to either combine those or else find more creative ways to start those sentences. The MC was primed by Scruples to become a 'Sandman'. This makes me wonder if he was manipulated, but still...

Wrote another chapter. I felt like getting another out. :3 Progress: 81 chapters Word Count: 117906 Page Count: 586

Maybe the problem is the subject isn't asking for beta readers! :3

I understand! We've all done that! *smiles* No matter what, parts of you will imprint on your characters. Making a character that's exactly the opposite of who you are might be the answer. Think about things you wouldn't do and maybe go with that! Do what you have to do to get those ideas...