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  1. CarburetorThompson

    Have your main character ever shot a man in [INSERT PLACE HERE]to watch him die?

    Never Johnny Cash, but I once started writing a BL short story based on Ringo by Lorne Greene (because seriously listen to that song and tell me it’s not a BL novel ( gonna link the song just so I can have this feeling vindicated)) but I’m not a BL fan and it was too much work for a shitpost.
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    you ever write something, and want to use a word, but feel like you shouldn’t because the...

    you ever write something, and want to use a word, but feel like you shouldn’t because the original meaning of the word has been usurped in the 21th century vernacular? I wanted to use the word cell, which originally meant a personal room in a monastery, but I feel like it’s too connected to...
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    The Insincere Post Ironic Unhelpful Feedback Thread

    Okay first things first I think the synopsis is a bit too much focused on the traits of the main character. It still talks about the plot a bit but more plot description would be preferable. If you want to look at some really good synopsises (synopsi? Synopsizes?) I recommend looking at my anime...
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    The Insincere Post Ironic Unhelpful Feedback Thread

    That was a pretty short story, but I can’t complain too much. The grammar and punctuation are good and it had a positive message.
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    The Insincere Post Ironic Unhelpful Feedback Thread

    Reading other threads made me want to do my own feedback thread. But if I earnestly tried I’d probably give up after like the first 2 stories. So here is a post-ironic and largely unhelpful feedback thread. I may or may not read your story, but either way I’ll still give advice. Standard rules...
  6. CarburetorThompson

    Didn’t Elon say something about genetically engineered catgirls once?

    Didn’t Elon say something about genetically engineered catgirls once?
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    google hp lovecraft cat ?

    google hp lovecraft cat ?
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  9. CarburetorThompson

    Choose

    Can you tell me why the comic is called hectopascal? I only read the first two chapters and I never found out why it is named after a measurement of air pressure And why that and not milibar or inch of mercury?
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    Choose

    4 because she’s the best character in that comic
  11. CarburetorThompson

    Munitions Mistress - Book One

    Marines have been fighting in the middle of a desert for the last 30 years. That’s like the complete opposite of what they’re supposed to do. If you go back to wwii, korea and Vietnam, that‘s when they did all almost all of the legendary shit, fighting on islands, beaches, rivers and swamps. wtf...
  12. CarburetorThompson

    Last non-fiction book you read.

    i haven’t gotten around to reading it yet, but I’ve heard it’s very self indulgent, basically him writing about how awesome he is.
  13. CarburetorThompson

    Last non-fiction book you read.

    Unironically planning to read it at some point. Part of me really likes readings books by brutal autocrats and trying to understand their fucked up thoughts. Was planning on reading Xijinpings book next. I also have a first edition English version of mussolini’s autobiography that I have to get...
  14. CarburetorThompson

    story tip: make it personal

    So you're saying I need to get the reader's ip address, and make it personal :blob_thor:
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    Last non-fiction book you read.

    What's the last non fiction book you read? If you read any at all. I don't read them very often. When I do it's mostly boring political books. Last one I read was Perestroika by Gorbachev, but that was like 6 months ago almost. I'm not going to count textbooks, manuals, or anything you are...
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    Recommendations Any fantasy stories about teamwork and strategy?

    https://myanimelist.net/manga/121165/Shinigami_ni_Sodaterareta_Shoujo_wa_Shikkoku_no_Ken_wo_Mune_ni_Idaku Not sure if you’re looking for something like this. This story has a lot of battle strategizing and planning. Besides from the obvious fantasy elements the fights are also pretty realistic...
  17. CarburetorThompson

    New Years Battle: Humans vs Vampires (Humans Win)

    Suffer not the witch, the mutant, the vampire
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