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  1. SirDogeTheFirst

    Free feedback thread.

    Hello, I like your feed back on my newest piece of trash. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/794596/generic-battle-academia/ You can pm me, but I am open to public shaming if you find it too horrendous.
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    I wholeheartedly hope you talk about the bee queen and not the cat or rabbits.

    I wholeheartedly hope you talk about the bee queen and not the cat or rabbits.
  3. SirDogeTheFirst

    Ooh, they said I'm talented...

    Webnovel contracts are predatory and mostly not worth it. Though, users who are more experienced in this topic will be able to give you a better insight.
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    What is your favorite non-sung piece/collection of music?

    This is like my comfort music.
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    Unless they do an epic Disney move and bribe to change public domain rules.

    Unless they do an epic Disney move and bribe to change public domain rules.
  6. SirDogeTheFirst

    Resolved Error Establishing a Database Connection

    It appears to be fixed (the moment I posted this it broke again bruh.)
  7. SirDogeTheFirst

    Feed back for a fight scene needed and will be much appreciated

    I kinda suck when it comes to describing characters' physical appearances (not the actual describing but when to describe,) so I (unknowingly) avoid it while writing. This is a habit I should break.
  8. SirDogeTheFirst

    Feed back for a fight scene needed and will be much appreciated

    First of all, thanks, I appreciate the feedback. And I also agree with many of your points, I should probably use at least two senses to give a more epic feel to attacks, especially since it will be a novel with superpowers. About dialogues, I somewhat agree with you, I have no plan on using...
  9. SirDogeTheFirst

    Feed back for a fight scene needed and will be much appreciated

    Hello, I currently write a battle academy book, and I need feedback on the fight scene in Chapter 1: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/794596-generic-battle-academia/chapter/794618/ I want to know if you think the combat flow is smooth or has holes and if my descriptions are decent or bad...
  10. SirDogeTheFirst

    A new author asking for help

    the command didn't work. [.URL='link to your series'][.IMG]link to your banner[/IMG][/URL] just delete the dots at [. , and apply it to your signature, it adds a picture that directs people to your book under all of your comments in forums. edit: Apparently I am an idiot incapable of copying...
  11. SirDogeTheFirst

    Just talk

    Just make a banshee character, and solve all your problems by "talking"
  12. SirDogeTheFirst

    A new author asking for help

    Yes, the cover is a big factor, like a really big one.
  13. SirDogeTheFirst

    Gratitude and Appreciation: A Milestone Reached

    My friend in writing. People already gave you most of the advice you need, but let me tell you something else. Sometimes success comes when you don't expect it. I will give an example from myself. Around end of 2021 my (now dropped) main story had a sudden increase in viewers started and went...
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  15. SirDogeTheFirst

    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Hello, I appreciate your feedback on Chapter 1: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/794596/generic-battle-academia/
  16. SirDogeTheFirst

    As someone who was so stupid in their childhood, cut their thumb with a shaving razor...

    As someone who was so stupid in their childhood, cut their thumb with a shaving razor (thankfully it was one of the guarded ones I didn't lose the finger) while trying to shave a bar of soap, I understand your pain. Be good fast, and here's a cookie :blob_cookie:
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    What class would you put the villains from My Hero Academia if they were in the One Punch Man world?

    Mostly tigers and some of them are demons. Only one who can reach Dragon level threat is all for one, and yet, I think compared to beasts like Golden sperm or sage centipede, he falls short.
  18. SirDogeTheFirst

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Hello, I would like your feed back for Chapter 1: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/794596/generic-battle-academia/
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    Kudos to all writers who spent hours rephrasing, grammar checking, listening through text to...

    Kudos to all writers who spent hours rephrasing, grammar checking, listening through text to speech and finally rewriting if they don't like. I did it once, and will not make it ever again.
  20. SirDogeTheFirst

    Paul's feedback thread

    I like to submit my newest piece of trash. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/794596/generic-battle-academia/ And please skip the prologue as it's just talking about the world's history, it's not part of the plot.
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