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@Nahrenne really got ya. Smitten much? LOL! (Teasing):blob_teehee:

Dude, you’re like half a foot/twenty-three cm taller than me.

I’m at an impasse on how to describe the actions concisely. Tearing my hair out on what descriptors, adverbs, and verbs would be most appropriate. Especially since most of these actions are verbal… How would you go about doing it?:blob_aww: That trio fits really well!:love:

Wow. Y’all are so helpful.:blob_teehee: Perhaps it is a problem with my phrasing. Instead of “apt”, I will replace it with something pertaining to specificity to get intended answer. What word, synonym to nervous, encapsulates and is most specific to the emotion here?

The power of editing.

I disagree. I think too much weight is put on context. Not only does context depend on how specific or broad your descriptions are everywhere (which makes the emotions they get vary from a simple description of laughter), but by investing more in the immediate actions of the characters, you can...

I would qualify that readers may or may not get an emotion from the line that describes his laughter. And, if taking your statement at face value, then I would posit that if the context only comes from a non-specific selection of descriptions, then the reader may not know the characters how you...

I don't think the readers would be able to get any sort of the same feeling you get from watching that though. They seem too distant from the true emotion, not evoking much.