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despite berserk being lauded for its detailed art and the emotional depth of its story, one thing ill always remember is this singular panel from the Black Swordsman Arc

While I do agree that audiences are to value the character more so than their journey, I'd argue that the same effect can be achieved when introducing the character through the first few steps of their journey. It's a deliberate shot to the kneecap to work from ass backwards, but I think it can...

Since I'm not sure on what you meant by "re-doing what I write in style", I'll just reply to what you've written here for now. If it means that you'll be revising this feedback in due time, well shit, this reply wouldn't age very well. That was the intent for the initial chapter. It was more of...

Carnal, with an explicit side of the Habsburg Jaw.

It's just pure copium on both sides. One side tries to make concrete, irrational distinctions over topics as personal and subjective as identity, so much so that they claim "bigotry" if your views don't 100% align with theirs. Another lets blue-haired dog-collar'd pundits live rent free in...

As per every other feedback threads I've visited, I will provide a list of my works, and the reviewer gets to choose which one they wanna do. Here be the three: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/62445/caninstinct/ This one's a bit lengthy, clocking in at around 6k words. It's your...

you see, criticism is the analysis of any given work, mounting both its merits and faults to provide an overall evaluation of said work's quality. it's used by creators as a way to identify their strengths and weaknesses and enhance the latter/rectify the former.

Download a photo cropping app. Set dimensions to 250 x 350. You're welcome.

I'll take fucking ANYTHING at this point. Praise or poison. Something to know someone's reading my stuff and paying enough attention to warrant an opinion from their experience.

Writers are spoiled with feedback threads like these. Though most of the time, they last around 3 pages before fizzling out, it's still something totally undeserved yet we keep receiving. As an unequal but attempted exchange, I'll give you three different works from yours truly for you to...

I wonder if there's shaman doctors out there in the 16th century providing dubious excuses to harass women like "oh my it seems you have a lump in your chest let me suck all the bad juju out of it"

You never had real NTR cause I fucked them all in their inboxes behind your back

"Ew this story has NTR I'm never gonna read it" >reads it I wonder if the MC or the readers are the real cucks here

Let me make it clear for you. Crystal Pepsi tier clear. If her bungas cannot asphyxiate me If her hunkoos aren't capable of total and complete meat-based Obelisk demolition If I can't motorboat her boo-boos to sound like the neighborhood Civic shitbox redlining at 2 in the morning I DO NOT...

I'll put it in easy terms: say you have Series A and Series A: The Spin Off. If you post chapters for Series A and then proceed to lock the rest in a paywall or Patreon or a different site without giving an explicit intent that your uploads are for sampling purposes only, that can be considered...

For a site that hates cucking and NTR SH does harbor a shit ton of NTR content And that one incest themed smut you linked has the aforementioned siblings be (surprise surprise) not blood related and have step parents. I don't like incest but what I hate more is half measures. Either go full...

I reckon we could make something up: My Girlfriend Transformed into a Cat In Heat, Can I Endure It??? (No I Cannot) I Reincarnated as an Onahole in a Beast Men Club The Delicacy System (The Utopia of Vore) Faults of Our Desires (A Kanna X Shou Tucker AU Crossover)

"they call me the Chest Sitter, for my ability to stand my ground and protect the Capital Treasury for over 50 years. I'm not to be confused with my distant brother, the Chest Shitter, whose queer interests have led him to be banned from over 50 red light districts across the kingdom"