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If you do not know what to do to stretch out an arc: Make a timeline. Put your events on this timeline. Think about what happens between the events, and about what kind of life your characters have during this time. If it still feels too rushed, you either need more events between the initial...

this is me thanking the pure and innocent maiden :blob_happy:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/135104/conversion/ I suck at writing any kind of synopsis. A person dies in a fight but was able to dislodge their soul from their dying body in preparation to reform their own body later on. The story focusses on this person trying to get back home and the...

I guess as a proper participant in the event, I should at least post some kind of reply to this threat. I am pretty sure that I conform to all requirements, as the story starts the death which resulted in the reincarnation as x! But half of the story is not about the 'mc' instead it is about the...

I seem to be unable to do it via PM

Concerning the knowledge: I find it strange that everything these MCs think about fantasy tends to turn out true in the world they get send to, which does not make any sense. One example of this was when I read about someone whose first encounter with some semi-civilised creature was with...

I don't like to use villains, because I feel like that is too easy (and too commonly used). There are characters in my story, and some of them are antagonistic to each other, some of them even to the "protagonist". There may be psychopaths in my story, but writing their pov is hard because...

Gourge out your eyeballs! Puncture your eardrums! Hit your head against a wall, and pray you can keep it up, until the brain damage is irreversible! Live the rest of your life as a vegetable! Works 10 out of 10 times, never heard any complaints from users of this method! (should you be looking...

When I think about third-person limited, I like to think about some random onlooker describing what they took away from the interaction. And that is what I try to do! But since I am a novice, I lack the skills to convey all the necessary information, thus I pity my readers for the torture I put...

Any government with an invested interest in staying in power, would try to use propaganda to pitch the powerful against each other, so they don't try to go against the govenment. Militaristic ones, like china, russia or USA would likely try to recruit them. While secretly searching for ways to...

I would have been inclined to agree with Jemini, was it not for the ratio in which villains and goodies appear. If it starts with high school kids, their hormone-filled brains will likely act up. Considering how entitled and selfish humans can be, only the most idealistic would hold back on...

B) since I already did C multiple times and it becomes kinda samey after the n-th time and I need some amount of story to keep me interested, thus A is not an option

In my opinion, vagabond and blade of the immortal are the most fitting ones, for what you want! Dungeon Defence is pretty dark but it may be too fucked up. I have not found anything alike on ScribbleHub, but that may be due to my ineptitude.

As long as you have not published the first chapter, the novel is hidden for everyone but you. And checking your profile, there is no published novel. After publishing the first chapter you will see your story in the 'latest series' segment on the front page. That is when you know that others...

OK, but what is ragouting supposed to mean?

I would be glad someone would give feedback. Without any feedback, I will never become better.

I see people talking about some kind of discord-server, but none of them provided a link

The way I see it: When entering a fight each character has the desire to win fast. (As long as it is not a sparring or training match.) So if you have a long fight you need to explain the circumstances. For example, the 2 parties are throwing rocks at each other's tanks, so it can take a...

I do not like starting to read stories that have less than15 to 20 chapters. Cause a lot of stories are abandoned before they reach that point. Also, a lot of stories with too many chapters have a sharp decline in quality along the way, so I mostly avoid stories with multiple hundreds of...

I just realized that comparing stuff is basically the same as using units. unit 1: boulder (for weight) unit2: log (for volume) unit3: younglingholding (for energy) My problem is that I don't want to explain to the reader what they mean every time they are used. Maybe it is not important for...