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  1. Zinless

    Kaitlyn Caitlyn Caitlin Kaitlin Katelin Kate Lynn Katelynn Katlyn Catelyn Katelyne Kaitlynn...

    Kaitlyn Caitlyn Caitlin Kaitlin Katelin Kate Lynn Katelynn Katlyn Catelyn Katelyne Kaitlynn Katlynn Katelynne Catelynn Kate-Lyn Kaytlyn Kaetlyn Caytlin Caytlyn Caetlyn.
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    Battle Maps

    I'm about to reach a part of my story where a short war will happen. Should I add maps with updates of the battlefield to the chapters? My story has no illustrations up to this point, so I fear it may feel out of place. If I should, what free app/site would you recommend to make the maps?
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    Learn how not to suck at writing

    Yes, but encouraging someone not to release their story just because of inevitable criticism is just... not good enough of a reason.
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    Learn how not to suck at writing

    I agree with the last part. No matter what people write, there will be haters who hate it. But, your initial point of keeping the ideas in the head and don't release them, I really have to disagree. The most important part is not to stop publishing your story because of fear of hate, it's the...
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    Feedback for the Prologue and the first chapter of my story.

    Formal would be the correct choice, but the way you written it is probably too formal. I don't know how to make them feel less stiff, since I don't know how the characters should act. I suggest adding some casualness into the dialogue, no one speaks formally like that in real life unless they...
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    There are a lot of things I want to do. -I have an idea for a second story that I want to write...

    There are a lot of things I want to do. -I have an idea for a second story that I want to write -I want to spend time learning art -I want to make a ton load of chapters for my current story -I want to finally repair that broken part of my wall But whenever I get up and say to myself, "Alright...
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    Spider milk?

    So...
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    Feedback for the Prologue and the first chapter of my story.

    Grammar seems great! The descriptions are detailed, but I feel some of the dialogues are a bit stiff. Here are some examples. But, it might just be me, take it with a grain of salt. Click your profile picture/name on the top right, you will see a drop down list of things you can click. Press...
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    Spider milk?

    Two, and a single Aunt May.
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    Spider milk?

    Marvel's been doing it for years. Not that I'm complaining.
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    Is this what the NTR stuff is about? [IMG]

    Is this what the NTR stuff is about?
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    Genderbent dudes in yuri is weirdly common

    Get burned.
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    Recommendations Kingdom Building with female MCs (That you absolutely recommend)

    I'm looking for some stories with female main characters that focus on kingdom building. Ones that you absolutely recommend/like. I prefer light hearted stories, but feel free to send me those heavy stuff. No preferences other than that, as long as kingdom building is central to the story...
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    Best.

    Best.
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    Suddenly The Main Character

    Wh-what's happening here?! I can't seem to understand a single word?!
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    Oh, come on! I just got through this a few weeks ago!

    Oh, come on! I just got through this a few weeks ago!
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    Tfw you realize, no selfcest tag :blob_blank:

    Tfw you realize, no selfcest tag :blob_blank:
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    I need to know, why do people like this?

    I agree with Sailus. Some people are just very stressed about things and these kind of stories kinda fit their needs. Let's take a look at a similar trope. There's a lot of Japanese light novel that focuses on "I got kicked out of X because Y" and it's usually about the MC getting revenge by...
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    this internet markup language uses > for quotes

    Markdown language. If I'm wrong, feel free to berate me. From the internet, Markdown language sample:
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