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Shoot I don't know, I was proud of my magic system. Not as proud of how I explained it in my story, but it works as an introduction for now. I plan to add more depth to it soon. I shared my ideas for my magic system but people said it was okay and that they read better. That's fair, its not...

Oh, by any chance was my story one of them? I'm working on a new cover art, but feedback is scarce. And I'm nervous, I've been writing for 5 years but I'm beginning to wonder if my writing or ideas aren't as good as I had hoped :blob_pat_sad: and I think the tags are good. I have an audience...

Gosh I wish I had a clear answer, I do. It's a different process for everyone. For me, I sit down and write an outline of what the chapter will be about. It's a way to start my progress while pacing myself. Then once I'm ready, I break the outline in parts and get to work writing out the...

Hm, I can share a few that are appropriate. I've a scar under my eye from the time I was hit by a car when I was 4. I think the reason it scarred was because I didn't get the wound stitch up to heal well, I don't think we had medical insurance at the time. I've got another scar across the...

Do you mean not much sex? There's no sex in this chapter. It's a nice idea, but I'm already taking a lot of creative liberties with different species, races, cultures and world building. Sometimes it helps to keep things a bit simpler, but I do appreciate the idea. But I don't like writing sex...

Okay, I went and edited the chapter with a focus on splitting some of the heavier paragraphs into two. Although, I'm not sure about changing the example you shared. Sigh, this might hurt a bit but I guess I need to tone back my own ambition and effort into my content. The point of the heavy...

Readers? Two friends of mine quickly joined as readers, but for new fans I didn't get new readers until after the second week. Same with page views. It's a work in progress, just a slow one. I'm thinking being an NSFW smut story that takes itself serious doesn't sound interesting to others...

Could you be more specific, like any details as to how it needs improvement?

Average word count for me is about 2.4k, but it varies. On Friday, my chapter was a near 5k word length. Yesterday's chapter was 2.5k words. My personal rule is my chapters need to reach at least 2k words, excluding the Introduction chapter.

Aww thank you :blobthumbsup: I'll still add the tag once the actual subplot is introduced, just to stay honest with my readers. Oh, and do let me know what you think about the story once you try it, feedback of any kind is welcome!

Ah I'll just remove that tag, the Girl's love subplot bas not yet been introbuced into the story. I am close to finishing the first act of the story, the GL subplot comes into play in the second act. So if the GL tag concerns you, it doesn't apply to the story as of yet. I hope you enjoy the...

The first act of my story is a slice of life, it introduces the daily life of the MC's while developing their characters. The story slowly shifts in tone over time, challenging these characters when they're put in hard situations, setting them up for Act 2. It's great for character...

Hi! I know my cover art needs work, but I'd like to read your thoughts on my story as well! Based on your conditions that is :blob_evil_two: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/889531/monster-girl-chronicles-book--kulikuli-the-nekomata/

If you don't mind Monster Girls, why not give my story a glance? :blob_aww: It's heterosexual, it has smut, and last I checked I am a female author. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/889531/monster-girl-chronicles-book--kulikuli-the-nekomata/

Damn, feels bad :ROFLMAO: my story has a werewolf but not the type you're looking for, and she's not the main protagonist. She's one of the main cast though, but still. Did you find the story you were looking for? :blob_evil_two:

The latest chapter in my story introduced the first argument between the main characters. I'll give you the TLDR of the story so far. During a bad storm, a lonely farmer named Felix finds an unconscious cat and takes her into his home. Or well, he's a caretaker but the owner is away. She is a...

Well I'm a bit jealous, at this rate you're stats will overpass mine in about four or five weeks. This whole keep adding chapters to maybe see if people give my stuff a shot is becoming a bane to my insecurities :ROFLMAO: Don't think about the word count as the deciding factor for where to...

Science does exist separate from magic, maybe saying that magic is both an art and a science was a confusing statement. In your example, simple medication works fine :blobthumbsup: Healing spells can repair wounds by enhancing the natural healing of others, but this is done by giving a part of...

Not at all, this is the reason why I mentioned that magic is only limited by our imaginations. It opens many possibilities for how magic can be used with the idea that the readers can understand how magic works and imagine how they would use it. Your idea about a magical barrier through Dark...

I don't have a name that encompasses it yet, but this is my first attempt at making a magic system for my Monster Girl Chronicles series. It is a Medieval inspired Fantasy setting full of Magic and Monsters where stories can vary from small to large stakes. It has romance, action, magic, growth...