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  1. SirDogeTheFirst

    Calling All Creatives: Help Me Craft a Story with Random Tags!

    LitRPG is complex only if you want it to be. You can just turn it into a joke system by adding stats like cooking, or stick bug dancing. I mean at the current state of the story, it might even be the most sane part of it.
  2. SirDogeTheFirst

    Roast your MC

    I used my cover and: Ah, the medieval fantasy knight strikes again, this time in the middle of a snowy forest. I mean, what's more practical than wearing a full suit of armor in freezing temperatures, am I right? And let's not overlook the historical accuracy here - because nothing says...
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    Just bored

    That's just robbery. My country is bad, like really bad, but at least public healthcare is good.
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    Just bored

    What is that upload! I have 10 upload for my 100 download
  5. SirDogeTheFirst

    Just bored

    Here, in most cases, internet speed is left at your provider's mercy except for one that is more expensive than others but actually gives you service. We pay 8 bucks for cable + 100mbps internet with unlimited data (what living in a third world country does to prices,) and for a phone plan, I...
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    Calling All Creatives: Help Me Craft a Story with Random Tags!

    I don't know what dish will come out of this pot, but I am ready to taste it.
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    Calling All Creatives: Help Me Craft a Story with Random Tags!

    Technically, making out with your clone also counts as incest. I leave the rest to you.
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    Calling All Creatives: Help Me Craft a Story with Random Tags!

    You just opened the way for gb gl and harem tags. Though I believe someone would write them even if you didn't.
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    Motsu's free editing and feedback thread!

    Thanks for the feedback:blobtaco:
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    Calling All Creatives: Help Me Craft a Story with Random Tags!

    Greed (so scribblehub has no greed tag, I wrongly rememered it, so, I change it into litrpg because why not)
  11. SirDogeTheFirst

    Sound effect help.

    Random bird site in internet says: Kee-eeeee-arr that lasts for 2 to 3 seconds.
  12. SirDogeTheFirst

    Sound effect help.

    So after some research, I learned that the iconic scream of bald eagles actually comes from red-tailed hawks, and bald eagles actually sound like seagulls. So for majestic bald eagles, the equivalent of meow is that annoying kee or kree sound made by those pesky food thieves.
  13. SirDogeTheFirst

    Sound effect help.

    Look, this will sound stupid but isn't "screech" already the most fitting onomatopoeia for a bald eagle's screech, maybe you can use cry or shriek, but they don't sound fitting as "screech".
  14. SirDogeTheFirst

    I am though. Imagine believing in existence of a continent that's wildlife is made out of...

    I am though. Imagine believing in existence of a continent that's wildlife is made out of B-Horror movie monsters, and jacked up human-possum-rat things that can jump very high and love boxing.
  15. SirDogeTheFirst

    Is there room for Urban (African) Fantasy?

    Fantasy stories based on legends and stories from Africa is super rare. Honestly, I never seen one before. So, depending on your stories contents and quality, you might strike gold or miss it completely. Also, I added the story to my reading list and will give you a basic feed back when I have time.
  16. SirDogeTheFirst

    After some thinking, I decided that small authors who get at least one comment a chapter are not...

    After some thinking, I decided that small authors who get at least one comment a chapter are not real and are actually government agents hired to make me feel bad. This is Australia all again.
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    I mean, at least it's not Vaporeon.

    I mean, at least it's not Vaporeon.
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    Feed back for a fight scene needed and will be much appreciated

    I have a question about tenses because English is not my native language. I heard using only one tense is better, but why? Sometimes, like when a character speaks, past tense doesn't work well as present tense. Can I jump between tenses from time to time, or is it a no? (Alright I finally...
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    As a proud spreader of virginity, I must make this suggestion. Not exactly a computer game but a...

    As a proud spreader of virginity, I must make this suggestion. Not exactly a computer game but a large dnd campaign could be fun (though it will be hard to monitor and find enough dms.)
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