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  1. witch_sorrowful

    Regarding Warnings: Gore

    Uhhh, just to digress a bit, IDK if you read Rhythm of War yet, but OMG there's one scene right near the end that almost made my skin crawl. But it wasn't what you would call classic gore!
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    God, I also hate Cultivation protags. Girls will always jump in for them.

    God, I also hate Cultivation protags. Girls will always jump in for them.
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    My first take on writing

    Because they are not obvious. As a reader, these things are not immediately obvious to you. You're like, this story is great! Or, "This story is bad, and it's boring." But, readers generally can't tell you why it is boring, or what to improve upon. Writing is about practice and (I should really...
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    Regarding Warnings: Gore

    I guess I understand what it means when you about human decapitations or what not. But what about monsters? At what level does a monsters description become "Gore"? Like, Nyarlathotep from Lovecraft Universe is a very yucky being with descriptions that lie even outside of human conscience. Or...
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    Yoooo did you read till RoW?

    Yoooo did you read till RoW?
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    It don't make sense. Nothing in Smut makes SENSE!

    It don't make sense. Nothing in Smut makes SENSE!
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    Rest in Peace. Long, long life, right in the spotlight of things. Not many get to live his tale...

    Rest in Peace. Long, long life, right in the spotlight of things. Not many get to live his tale, and it is quite a tale, along with all the ups and downs that a human experience can offer.
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    Regarding Warnings: Gore

    What is the line of the warning of Gore? Sure, if you're going to talk about how intestines suddenly expanded and an alien insect comes digging out of your backside (not my story, Stephen King), that is gore. As are graphic descriptions of heads being lopped off, with blood spurting out and...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Honestly, I'm I'm a spiritual lyrical individual Spiritual miracle lyrical individual
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    My first take on writing

    Yes! Which why I think you will find it useful to listen to someone talk about it, take notes and understand what writing Fiction (specially Fantasy and SciFi) is. It is much like solving a puzzle that you come up with yourself. The premise is common. I like it. It's a good first attempt at a...
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    My first take on writing

    Hmm, there's a couple of things you could do. The first one is easier, but requires time. The other one is harder, but requires time and talent. The first is to read and listen to lectures on writing. Or at least understand what makes a story better than the other. What is a narrative...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    @HURGMCGURG You've had the lead long enough. KAMEHAMEHAAAA!
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Precisely.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    You traveled through time, but can you travel through space? *Time teleport leaves you 0.016 Light years, or 151 Billion Kilometers behind.*
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Are you Kujo Jotaro? WOT. MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Not if time itself is stopped
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    Rough day, man. The new day will be better.

    Rough day, man. The new day will be better.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    You thought you could see them coming, but it is I, ZA WARUDO
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    How to write Smut Isekai? T_T

    How to write Smut Isekai? T_T
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