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  1. ElijahRyne

    Offering feedback on the first chapter of your story (No Smut)

    Here you go: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2276316/the-meditations/
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am winning currently.
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    Mildly Unreliable Story Feedback [CLOSED]

    Here is one story to try: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2276316/the-meditations/
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    New story, go here if interested. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2276316/the-meditations/

    New story, go here if interested. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2276316/the-meditations/
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am currently winning.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am winning currently.
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    Perhaps, or perhaps not. Thy concoction is best used to save our lives methinks.

    Perhaps, or perhaps not. Thy concoction is best used to save our lives methinks.
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    Sleep, will thy embrace claim my weary heart, or will thine grace elude me.

    Sleep, will thy embrace claim my weary heart, or will thine grace elude me.
  9. ElijahRyne

    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    I would have us flee into our domiciles, or burn his concoction to pacify the pestes. I was told to say ‘Do you seriously think a scalie convention, with a hundred attendees would have eight straight men.” Howevers I have little knowing on what those words mean. If flight and hiding doesn’t work...
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    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    Methinks you should choose as Peter Parker didst and sacrifice the ‘Mary Jane’ for another. Do not thou wish for Paul to be happy.
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    Are books on writing any good?

    Practice will make perfect, also don’t use AI to rewrite your work even if it looks better. 1 it harms your ability to improve at writing in English, and 2 it harms your credibility with the reader more than any poor grammar could. Practice and feedback will be the best option, and the book may...
  12. ElijahRyne

    Are books on writing any good?

    It is not likely to hurt your writing, and may improve it. However, if you are looking for advice there are many free resources online, and if you are looking at getting better targeted practice followed by useful feedback/criticism of that practice will always be best. Feel free to experiment...
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    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    The pterosaurs may be weak to the oder of thine concauction, and thou refusest to save thy life because you worry about the cost, and using it to fly to the pestes. If my heart knew worse, I would thinks that thou whishes to take the mad woman’s place. Pterosaurs are after all more receptive to...
  14. ElijahRyne

    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am currently winning. Are thou surviving the pterosaur attack?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am winning currently.
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    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    Why not just put thy concoction on the fire, and smoke outs the whol area?
  17. ElijahRyne

    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am currently winning.
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    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    Dost thou mistakes lusts for love? Methinks she is sinking in troubled watyrs, and that thou ar lost. The bouth of thee truly do not know that these pestes prefer testes?
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    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    I do not completly know what the words coming from thine mouth meant. None of the less, there are more then eight pterosaur, even if the mad woman’s jest works we have more than a hundred of the pestes to deal with. Running would do thee better methinks.
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    Writing Prompt What dost thou do when the pterosaurs attack?

    Thy casts thine die in the hopes oft a jest. A salve is not going to make thee invisible, thine form will be seent and thou will be torn by the limb. Are we to die here in thihs feild? Look, there ar more than a hundread oft thems.
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