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There's soft and hard world building. Soft means it doesn't really matter how the world works behind the scenes. E.g Studio Ghibli, Harry Potter(minus her tweets) No info dumps required for soft - leave it up to the reader/viewer to imagine how the economy works. The plot should not be...

self-plug in my signature, but it's an original story rather than based on a game. Otherwise, WH40K is pretty good, tons of fanfic out there. Halo series pretty good too.

Honest feedback is not the same as accurate feedback. Honest feedback: "I don't really like the sci-fi genre as I never really read it before, but it would be great if you could tone down the explanation of technology and how it works. Honestly I don't care about the details and whether this is...

Bocchi the Rock?

'The Painted Man' had a damn good system of only being able to utilize magic when drawn - e.g you had to carve or draw onto something physical. So people kept wooden sticks, staffs and armors full of the engraving as cramped as they could, maximizing space. Enchanted swords only kept their...

System-based Smut with Harem is where it's at.

Broke through #2000 on royal road, now ranked #1855. Basically got there spamming review swaps, but its working!

young tanned skin boy, but he's wearing a mechanical exosuit. He has a white buzzcut and amber yellow eyes, and is about twenty years old. His main weapon is a technologically advanced spear. His face has a few scars, along with blemishes of grease. The scene should be him dodging a large blue...

Smut

I think he means he hates opening scenes where you're thrown into a battle for no apparent reason. Something like how Halo:Combat Evolved started with the human ship suddenly under attack from the Covenant, but you're not sure why and you suddenly have to escape a burning ship? Yea that kind of...

I actually had a student once who decided that satellites communicate with each other solely through sound waves. Took a while to explain the truth to him, but he rewrote it saying they communicate through audio waves...

Helpless main female characters, who apparently cant do anything on their own.

We're at Rising Stars Sci-Fi #25 on Royal Road, and we just hit 100k words mark with the latest release! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/651586/ceress-chaos-a-tragic-space-opera/