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I am creating an interactive story, but could not find a tag like that. Assuming I am not blind, I am asking for an interactive story tag. Thank you!

LitRPGs and System novels inherently handicap themselves in the long run for short term success. Of course with good writing a lot of this can be somewhat alleviated, but not solved without drastic change. How/why? 1. It hampers the action action in any series, by removing the difficulty of...

(This is a bit of a rant, so sorry…) I currently have 6-7 different things I want to write but there are a couple of issues in my way, and I feel stuck in a loop of trying to do something and getting barely anything, if not nothing, done. To the extent that I only got a paragraph done last week...

I have been reading too much Chinese stuff recently, so these points have became obvious areas of improvement in those things I have read. You probably know the difficulty of searching for a story where the MC doesn’t go from 100 elo-practically a Grand Master, or stronger, in ~10 chapters is...

The goal of the system is to explain how different planes, their power systems, and the universe more broadly works, using a more alchemical foundation. The simplified magic system contains what will exist on the plane the story starts on, and the advanced is the more detailed explanation...

It might also be the case for the iPhone, but I don’t own one. When ever I autocomplete a word, backspace the added space, and put punctuation, the punctuation mark replaces the last letter. S, sentences often go like thi. If I don’t go back and fix it.

I have recently gotten back into reading Chinese & Korean web novels. But, I am hesitant to continue because of the face slap. Every work I have started the past couple of weeks has had this to some extent. They start off good, but slowly begin to degenerate in to the Magic Era curse. It was in...

Currently mine is this: https://www.mtlnovel.com/start-as-a-lord-in-a-viscount/ It was a fairly good series from start to everything but the end. The MC had discovered a mystery about how gods were the hidden rulers of the planes, and that they are resting in the astral plane. He then takes...

Make sure to describe every step to cast/preform the spell or ritual. Here is mine Basic Ritual for the Creation of a Coerced Contract and Seal for Astral and Ethereal Entities. Required: The name of the form of the target written on paper. (i.e. an Ice Spirit of a frost plane.) The more...

There, wtf is it spelled there? And where? My head can’t handl th silent e’s…

Doubt this could actually be implemented, but I might as well suggest it…

I will do my best to go through the first 1-3 chapters of your work. I will not give feedback on smut, it is just not my cup of tea nor my area of amateur expertise. I will also not review anything that glorifies the exploitation of children or people more generally, as in slavery, blackmail...

The stuff that it takes a second to realize what happened. In this one, Cho Chikun has realized he is out of tea.

A thing I came up with. They live under the surface of the world. These intelligent creatures have high attainments in alchemy and stone shaping, the latter is how they create their tools, tunnels, weapons, and traps. They are omnivores, their diets consist off of various cultivated fungi...

Just saw this, trust me it is worth the watch…

If you read those old choose your own adventure books, you know what I am talking about. Simply put you have a chapter, or small series of pages, where you are presented with a choice do a or b if you do a you go to this chapter or these pages, and if you do b you go to these chapters or those...

If a series or book has less than 100,000 words and is not completed, I won’t start it. Otherwise I will finish it in 2-3 hours and will spend an equal amount of time, or more, searching for something else to read, without even finishing a story…

Describe how a character is feel through their narration on the environment. Here I am going for the feeling of loss. Silently, we walked through long grass and tall weeds that poked out through the degraded railroad’s ballast. The roads wooden ties were rotten and ruined. The rusted rail...

Here is an example, this one gives me some Looney Toons vibes…

This would be the prequel to a series, the magic system is less DnD and more Call of Cthulhu meets Nen. An example is binding your self, either physically or spiritually, with an object to take on some of its characteristics. Like binding with a blade to get its flexibility and sharpness, but...