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  1. ElijahRyne

    When rating something do you see a 5/10 as average or failing?

    Personally I think the average is a 5/10, like string cheese. Not bad, but not good. A 4.9-4 is below average, like 3d Beserk. Above average is 5.1-6, like Terror in Resonance. I think you get the picture. Where this method shines is when you get to stuff from 8-10. Normally people use 7/10 as...
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    Rough draft of first chapter. Thoughts, suggestions, and can you figure out the mystery.

    Please tell me your thoughts and suggestions. Also, as the title says. I know what the mystery is, but can’t tell if I have given it away by being too heavy handed, or if it is uninteresting, or if I am doing it correctly. Anyways, here is the
  3. ElijahRyne

    This scene is missing something, what suggestions do you have?

    Just finished writing this scene, but feel as if it is missing something: ——— A hand grabbed my shoulder. “Remember Jake, we are meeting in the cafeteria at eight in the morning.” My dad whispered before laughing and patting my back. “Don’t be too late, we won’t miss Wen’s concert for you...
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    On naming the main character/point of view characters

    I really have a dislike of reading stories where the MC has my name, so I try to avoid popular names when coming up with a mc’s name. So instead I try to string together random syllables until it sounds like a name, I used to translate two words into two different languages and try to mash them...
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    I don’t think I will ever finish this story, nonetheless I am giving it to you to read…

    This is a story that I wrote into 100 walls. It is disjointed and feels like it is going in 20 different directions. It has some of my best writing, trapped in all of that. I am certain a more confident or experienced writer could bring the story justice, none the less here it is. Please share...
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    Does this make sense and would you read/participate in it?

    Here is a first chapter in a new interactive story I am preparing. I wanna know if the rules make sense, if the scenario is too short, and if possible would you participate in it when I have it ready.
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    Thoughts?

    Potential first chapter of new story, what are your thoughts on it? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - The yellow sky with its purple clouds darkened as day turned to night. The squirming grass tried to grasp my feet as I walked forwards. The...
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    Music IQ

    https://www.themusiclab.org/quizzes/miq You?
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    What is your favorite ost(s)?

    I feel like this has a higher quality than the majority of the osts I have listed to. This is among the more unique I have listened to.
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    What did you do today?

    I went to work, came back home, watched YouTube while playing Sudoku, read for an hour or so, fell asleep for a couple of minutes, woke up with a bit of chest pain, continued to read and watch YouTube. Also, I think I have a problem… I need to use my time better…. You?
  11. ElijahRyne

    Somewhat disheartening

    So I came up with a story idea. I am exaggerating it here to get the point across, but… A psychic who can erase memories teams up with a person who can control metal to fight for people with powers, and other political issues. Eventually they split due to disagreements in tactics and become...
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    Bugs Don’t know if this fits…

    Whenever I load a form page that is primarily just linked videos. That page takes at least 3 minutes to load if it doesn’t crash multiple times. I am on mobile/iPad/Safari, but if I request the desktop site this also happens. If I try on my phone, android+chrome, this also happens, same with my...
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    ‘‘Twas just scrolling

    I was just scrolling when something caught my eye.
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    What are your food takes/preferences

    Tomatoes are disgusting and are only good in stews, soups, chili, and some pasta sauces. Bell peppers are disgusting and I have never had a good one. Pizza is better without marinara sauce. Pineapple can work on pizza. The only good sauce for chicken strips is southern gravy. Burgers are better...
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    Which is the better pfp?

    1. 2. 3. 4. 5. I have been hopping around a bit recently so…
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    How stubborn are your reading preferences?

    If a story that I am really interested in has less than 100k words, I will wait until it reaches 100k words before reading. Even if it never happens or takes a year or two. If I come across pointless melodrama in a series I otherwise like, there is a 90%+ chance I drop it then and there. Even if...
  17. ElijahRyne

    You would lose.

    If you were a human, unless you are carrying bombs on you or other military level gear, you would lose to a tiger. Especially if it has been shadowing you for a while, and decides to attack when you are least suspecting it. Read this for a bit more info...
  18. ElijahRyne

    1,000

    So, this is my thousandth post here. Bit confused how people can break this barrier in less time, although I guess not taking yearly 2 month breaks will help. So, if you have made it, what was your 1,000th post? Or, better yet what are you eating? I just finished a Jimmy Johns sandwich and am...
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    There is a question I have bad for years now…

    Is this for the for the forums or the main site? Because I have soo many questions if it is the forums with that number…
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    You ever come up with a story idea you don’t think you would be able to pull off?

    I recently came up with an idea I have been working on, but the more I do the more I feel inadequate to pull it off. How about you, and if you are willing what is the idea? P.S. If you want me to show my work, I will
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