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  1. OokamiKasumi

    Writing One Sentence Paragraphs -- Trending in Free stories posted Everywhere.

    One Sentence Paragraphs. Trending in Free Stories posted Everywhere. One sentence Paragraphs: "It's kind of become a habit after reading too many Korean web novels." Are you reading Translated Korean web novels? The separation of Dialogue from the Actions of that speaker; creating short...
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    Writing How long should a chapter be and which is more preferable?

    Short chapters (1000 words) are a trend originally caused by Translated novels posted on the 'Net. A trend picked up and perpetuated by amateur writers also posting their stories on the 'Net. This trend of super short chapters happened because most translators tend to break the chapters into...
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    Help with sentence

    "You're not supposed to have two people Acting in the same paragraph for the exact same reason you Don't have two different people's Dialogue in the same paragraph. You're definitely Not supposed to have two people Acting in the same sentence." This comes from Strunk & White's Elements of...
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    Help with sentence

    Never mind the envelope thing, the sentence itself is Backwards, AND you have two different people Acting in the same paragraph. You're not supposed to have two people Acting in the same paragraph for the exact same reason you Don't have two different people's Dialogue in the same paragraph...
  5. OokamiKasumi

    What motivated you to stop being a reader and write your own fiction?

    I couldn't find any decently written stories in the genres I wanted to read, so I decided to write one myself. It snowballed from there. ☕
  6. OokamiKasumi

    Thank you!

    Thank you!
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    Writing How Important is Description in your Writing?

    Ooooooooo! let me try that! -- It worked! Thank you!
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    Writing How Important is Description in your Writing?

    THIS Important: Remember, your Readers can and will imagine anything at all, unless you write Specifically what you envisioned.
  9. OokamiKasumi

    Guns in Fantasy

    Gods... I HATE when an author doesn't bother with the research because they think their readers Won't Know.
  10. OokamiKasumi

    Guns in Fantasy

    Watch the movie; Equilibrium. -- It has Gun katas. Find movies that have the type of combat you want to write. Watch Them. Take notes on what you See because that's what you want to appear on the page. Tutorial: [Tutorial] NSFW! Creative Narrative - A Description EXERCISE And for the sake of...
  11. OokamiKasumi

    Seven Levels of Fantasy

    To go into just a tad more detail, he was rating the levels of writing -- the author's level of Craftsmanship in writing fantasy. It was an excellent video. I find it very telling on who skimmed it vs. who actually watched it.
  12. OokamiKasumi

    Can a story end with mysteries not cleared up

    Have you solved all the Issues (Plot+Emotional) that you brought up at the Beginning of the story for ALL your Main POV Characters? If YES: You're story is officially Done. If NO: Tie up those loose ends -- then you're Done.
  13. OokamiKasumi

    Writing [Tutorial] So you want a Critique? [Warning: RANT]

    I did not forget. You're welcome, and thank you. I'm glad I could be of assistance.
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    Writing [Tutorial] You Don't ALWAYS have to Show. Sometimes you Can TELL!

    Plot Pacing and Narrative Summary By Randy Ingerman (Posted WITH Permission) Featuring: Harry Potter & the Sorcerer's Stone ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If there's one thing that any writer is guaranteed to hear too many times, it's the dictum, "Show, Don't Tell." There is a lot of truth to this rule of...
  15. OokamiKasumi

    Be descriptive

    I agree. That's why I posted these tutorials: [Tutorial] Is Description really needed? YES. [Tutorial] Tricks to Tight 'Sneaky' DESCRIPTION [Tutorial] NSFW! Creative Narrative - A Description EXERCISE LOL! I actually own some of the books where a lot of this came from! ☕ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~...
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    Too spicy for RR?

    That would be True, especially since both the anime companies and the manga/manhua companies prefer books that are already popular in their own countries. It's just good marketing for companies to create and promote something that is already selling. And it's the Marketing Department that rules...
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    Too spicy for RR?

    A worthy goal. -- Why not try to find a Publisher for it? For authors looking for a publisher: these are the best Progression Fantasy/LitRPG publishers Patreon is not a Publisher. They are a platform for promoting and selling products, like Etsy, only a lot more involved. Stories posted on...
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    Too spicy for RR?

    Where do you want your litrpg WIP to Go? -- Or rather, where do you want your litrpg WIP to end up? ☕
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