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@SenseiHusky Here, this fella is willing to rate your stuff. :blobthumbsup:

First off? You weren't lying about the intent. Yeesh, this isn't edge for edge's sake here. You got a through-line of fear that's got teeth and it's hungry. Look at how it uses that fear as theology, as a political weapon, and as a psychological infection. That's pretty real for a theme, and...

Careful about hijacking someone else's thread, there. :blob_okay: Hey, may I ask you a question about this dialogue? I've noticed quite a few people now are doing this and I'm not sure why they create a break between the same character who's still speaking. See what I mean here?

Ah, this. Okay. Let me deal with the other thread first.

Rate?

Yeah, I got a fourteen year old kid to feed too.

Alright, back from work. So, I'm not talking about the act but, rather, about the aftermath. You know, the mess that doesn't evaporate in a poetic fade-to-black. See, most stories treat suicide as an ending or the period to a narrative. Well, what if it wasn't a period but a comma? Yeah, let's...

Just got back from work. Lemme see what's in there. :sweat_smile: The first line of the synopsis... :blob_blank:

Heading to work. I'll explain when I return, okay? :blob_okay:

You ever considered how the novel would follow up if they failed?

It's about immersion. You, me, everybody being in their head doesn't make us them, but it does let us experience the world as they do, you know, through their senses. :blob_okay:

Ah, you beat me to that feedback thread. :sweat_smile:

I'll get around to this. :blobthumbsup:

Just to clarify something before any of us get into this: are we dealing with one person possessing the bodies of two others or does Rayna and Lillian have their own personalities and lives?

Hey, quick question before I get into this: you've got two tags that seem to be in conflict with each other: Love at First Sight vs. Slow Romance. So, I am getting the Slow Romance vibe, but not this Love at First Sight business... unless you're talking about what happened at the airport? You...

Worse exists... yeah, hopefully we are all fully aware, and there are some things I've read decades ago I could've lived without. Yeah... I'm glad you are aware; that realization matters. At some point we stop writing around those scenes and just write the novel. The comparison to other novels...