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I also hate the ice-cold "huehuehue everything is within my plans" main characters that never mess up, and even if they do, its actually "within their plans." Boring. And annoying.

I agree with everything you just said.

Medusa goes on a trip to find someone that won't get petrified, but only manages to find a treasure that causes her to regain her beauty (from before her encounter with Athena) AND causes her snakes to become lamia and the like.

He means a "random fic" button. https://www.novelupdates.com/random-novel/

I don't think this is the right website for this. This is Scribblehub.

It's great. However, now you should work on awkward wording for your first and last paragraph. You have gotten all the relevant information across quite well now, though.

Maximum count of what? This feature is quite frankly pointless when you can simply copy and paste the user's profile into an private/incognito browser and still see everything. The cost doesn't justify the effects, not to mention why would you want this in the first place?

This is a lot better. I still recommend implementing some of the changes I outlined above in my version. I think it flows a bit better. This synopsis is improved in many ways. The two lover characters are introduced a lot better, with some of the their pasts and conflicts revealed. It makes...

You dissin' our blobs? :blob_thor: That said, maybe Tony can disable the normal smileys since BLOBS ARE OBJECTIVELY SUPERIOR TO SMILEYS @Tony

This time you left off the character introductions. Who is "they?" Their titles (heir/general/whatever of Dragon/Phoenix clan) and some background about the relations between the tribes. What do you mean by debt? I notice you cut out the underworld guy completely. If he's going to be a main...

HIV because humans can't cure it.

Like the anime/manga/whatever, but with two girls.

If I am allowed one question: Why is your title so non-descriptive and generic? Something like "Fate of a Thousand Lives | 千世缘" tells the reader nothing and basically does nothing but sound cool. Titles just like it are also a dime a dozen in Chinese novels. Even in your synopsis, you have "A...

Toothed Whales, because those are the ones that will actually drown you. Only small animals like dogs get drowned by raccoons.

Turtles, since they don't drown in water.

Sea Snails--some of them got venomous harpoons for poking.

The sword of the hero and a letter dedicating it to the summoner.

Please late warmly while the admins go through the submissions and manually approve your novel.

Starfish because they have brainy tentacles. Edit: I say brain in the loosest sense of the word.