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Mine is there so that the Gods can choose who can become the next God. You don't want Godsville to be overcrowded now, do you? :blob_cookie:

I don't remember the story that much. Is it the one where the MC calls a goat his mother? And the author goes into very descriptive details about how he sucked the milk directly out of it?

Homunculi are blasphemous to God's mighty will. Golems are fine.

Not every line. But it's good to put them in some lines. Have the characters react to what the other says instead of just writing pure conversations.

Sky red as blood - The scene I am most familiar with. Why must I suffer in this death-filled world? Family, friends, lover, all gone; With myself soon to follow. I mourn for the death of everything I loved, For the warmth that could never be retrieved. But why? Why must I feel this way? Why...

you won't get paid. We work as a slaves for our dark lord Tony.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Schizophrenia

Artcore and gothic hardcore. 2 very underrated genres

The middle one is a Wyvern not a Dragon but it looks best.

You will definitely improve over time. But trust me, it will be a long way until you get there, and I mean super long judging by your grammar right now. So if you want to write a decent story, you should hire and editor (cough cough me for $5 per 3000 words cough shameless self-advertising...

Anime girl = more readers. Trust me, I have first-hand experiences.

oh boy, light magic. You can do so much with it. One of the most underrated way to use light magic is hardening light. If your enemy is under the sun, you can literally trap and/or suffocate them to death by hardening the light around them. You can also makes loads of illusion (which again is a...

There you go, that's your problem. Even with grammarly, your chapters will still read like a MTL'd novel.

No. The sun is a deadly laser.

I can buy one for 2.99 though in alaksa Granted, it's asmall one, but it's still a burger SPEAKING OF BURGER cough cough self-advertising I'm willing to work as an editor/proofreader for $5 per 5000 words. I don't know how good I am because I don't have a reference point. If you want to see...

1.5 burgers for editing 1k words is a far price I think

People often charge around $5 for 1000 words of proofreading + editing so idk

There are more than one character. Lies. Deceit. Foolery. Heresy. Delete this thread!

yea, I forgot. Puking can somehow help too. I feel a lot better after puking for some reasons