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    Raid?

    Even scammers are hit bad by the economy. First it was Nigerian princes, then random never-heard-of-before rich relatives dying, and now? Now it's just winning random useless gifts.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

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    Is This Idea Too Cheesy?

    I have not seen something this cheesy since I gave up on Chinese cultivation novels.
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    Why are child pagents a thing?

    Because stupid parents want to feel superior to others, and if their own merit is not enough, they will push that desire onto their childern. Also, money. And since the aliens are clearly not participating, they are giving up their claim to Miss Universe by default.
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    Prologue to a story that may never happen...

    The logic is that "it" is primarily used for objects, animals or childern. A beggar is clearly neither an object nor an animal, and we don't know if the beggar is a child, so "it" should not be used here. "They" is used as a singular pronoun when you don't know or want to reveal the subject's...
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    Need writing advice.

    It looks like a promising read so far. Minor grammar issues, punctuation could be improved, and I think I saw some misplaced and repeated words, but I have not spotted any major issues. If I were to point out something, it's mostly the last time skip. It's sudden, practically without any...
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    Need writing advice.

    I would say it depends on what you want from your story. If you want a serial/episodic story that you can pick up or drop anytime (Friends, Spongebob... something with a loose background plot/overarching setting tying it all together, but each episode about something else), making it up as you...
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    Prologue to a story that may never happen...

    Looks like a promising setting and start for a story. A city that is pressumably not doing too badly yet, but is already in a downturn, going by what little of its state we have seen and that nobody knows how to maintain the clocktower anymore. Everywhere else in this context you use "it", but...
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    Got an idea and want to try writing a book, and can't decide race and specialization of mc want to hear some comments

    The last one sounds most interesting to me. That said, if this post is an example of how you would write your story - for the love of God, use punctuation. Split up your sentences. Really, this is practically unreadable.
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    Why is it that my account on scribble hub is always been banned

    It looks like my casual (and admitedly not very good) half-joke touched a spot. My point is, people don't usually get banned over nothing. Even people who openly break content guidelines with their stories usually only get those stories hidden. So either there was an unusually serious error in...
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    Why is it that my account on scribble hub is always been banned

    So what rules did you break? What depraved crap did you post to get yourself banned?
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    Migrating Accounts. Can I Delete And Reupload My Novels?

    Joined today, and has 7 posts, all either strange or outright strongly suspicious... It might not be a bot itself, but it's almost certainly a scammer/other shady creature.
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    What does this inscription mean?

    Girl (?) - self-descriptive 10 feet [tall] Waist-length [hair] 3 colour eye - probably means her(?) irises have three colours, instead of the usual 1 or rarely 2 colours for humans? Ear/scale/fin - human ears, scaled skin, a fin somewhere on her body (vaguely mermaid- or naga-like?) 4000 psi...
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    Does a harem half to be romantic?

    Technically, if they are just party members with no romantic or sexual interest/involvement between them (except for the actual romantic pair), it's not a harem. It might stray dangerously close, depending on execution, but it's not. Even in badly written Jap harems, even though the guy is the...
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    Should An Evil Protagonist Save The World?

    Why is the evil protagonist evil? What makes them evil? What is their goal? If they want to take over the world, and there was something that threatened to destroy the world, then they could save it if there is noone else to do it. Because what's the point of ruling over ashes, even if you make...
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    It's time to build a village! (Mini-Game)

    A haze envelops the village... romour has it the Necromancer is somewhere inside it, but none have seen him. ---------------------- Buildings ✅ (-3,-3) Tree Greenhouse: Pile of Glass [1/1] Steel [2/2] Tree seeds [5/5] ✅ (-2,-2) Monument Foundations: Perfectly Normal Necromancer's Walking...
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    It's time to build a village! (Mini-Game)

    A passing necromancer decides to erect a monument in the forgotten cozy hamlet. He gives up after marking the foundations, leaving just his gnarly old walking stick stuck in the ground. ------ Buildings ✅ (-3,-3) Tree Greenhouse: Pile of Glass [1/1] Steel [2/2] Tree seeds [5/5] ⚒ (-2,-2)...
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    Old Members Returning

    Apparently I have been fairly regularly active on the forums since I joined. It does not feel like it :blob_dizzy:
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    Is This Clear and Easy Enough to Understand?

    Yep, I would say that does the trick.
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