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And I am Sinless, as per my name

The MC did apologize to him, there's really no other choice but to kill him. It's better than leaving him alive and letting his mind be consumed by the power and cause chaos (which always happens to the ones isekaied there). I have my criticism for the story as well, mostly in the romance. But...

I'm not creative enough for a name like that, but I assume you'll have him say death flag lines as well. "After this, I'm finally going to propose to Jessica back home!"

Red(e) from Clothes(ed) Doesn't make sense, it's for a name after all.

Rotte von Kleidungst Play on german words and made more 'noble' sounding. "Rote Kleidung" means "Red Clothes". Rotte von Hemdall could also work. (Rote Hemd) Baldich Todt "Soon, I die."

Bold of you to assume the readers who hate the NTR don't want to see revenge arcs. Especially if the author managed to invest his readers properly. This could be the start of a great tragedy, and I'm here for it.

Most readers don't visit the forums, so there's still a lot of unassuming potential victims for him to torture.

Give small glimmers of hope that the 'Hero' will get his "revenge". That'll keep some readers at least.

A full-on jerk getting the girl would be more grating to the readers I believe. But, humanizing them could also work. There are many, I do mean many, readers who self insert themselves into the first average looking, perhaps a bit of a loser looking, boy they could find. For example, the boy...

The shipment for my new chair was delayed and then cancelled for some unknown reason. Now I have to wait for a refund to re-order. So, I tried drawing while sitting on a bed. WIPs:

But the bully who's also the elder's son can.

No chair, draw in bed, arm hurt, sleep.

No, this is not true. Most people like slow burns, but most don't actively look for it or even notice that they like slow burns. Having the history of the characters just laid out in the open the moment you open a story is a turn off because you can't relate to that character yet. Imagine...

My chair broke while I was sitting on it and I almost got stabbed in the hole Great day...