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really... I thought she was well done... I figured you just weren't going for the super beautiful image, but more of a regular human being.

I just paid what I consider a reasonable fee from one of SH's artists to make a new cover for DEN instead of the AI slop I had for a FF I make no money off of, but that was because I plan on hiring her when I send my OG work to Amazon for sale to do all it's art and wanted to see what she could...

valid concept then. I think it would be hilarious if she was even more non chalant about it, like drinkinga juice box or something... Something like this, cept obviously not sexualized like this pic, just like f- it im tired, ill chill here for a bit

2nd... the first looks like a weirdly focused camera... almost like using a fisheye for a portrait shot. Edit - I will say I like the idea of her sitting on top of her kill here more than the other one... just not the extended leg thing.

Look at this masterpiece @pangmida made for me! I just noticed this... all the ducks need to be aware of this Yandere =P

Thanks for the new avatar

This... is beautiful Yoink

Yep. LitRPG is a fairly wide brush. You could have a world where everyone has a 'system', such as the LN The Great Cleric, but even then, the MC has a slightly OP version of the system just from a buff given to him by the god that reincarnated him into that world. SoLev or Re: Monster are...

Ouch... I didnt know the bottom one was there... i forgot how bloody bright default was

Yeah, it's a preference. Honestly, reading something primarily in first person is really, really weird to me. Most novels I have read since I started reading them 30 years ago are written primarily in 3rd person with very little 1st person sprinkled in.

My FF is a world hopper, and after the initial getting the MC used to this idea, I have been writing 80k+ word stories in each world, spanning 35-45 chapters each time. It's all under the same web novel, but each world is pretty much its own full-length story. Usually by the end, he (MC) needs...

Corrupt, inhumane, demonic. These are some of the words used to describe the desert city of Bashaar, who's Zarr ruled over the city with an iron fist and terrible magic. When the Zarr began destroying holy shrines with powerful fire tornadoes, the Goddess Lassie had just about enough. She...

Every scene is different. I have a mixture of melee combat, magic combat, firearms, and even giant robots. If you are going to write it, it needs to be important, with stakes. If your MC or whoever you're focused on at the time, is just going to steamroll, you can gloss over that fairly...

/shrug It all depends on what you want. If you're not really 'feeling' the smut, then don't smut... fade any of the scenes to black, or maybe gloss over it. The only thing worse than fading to black is phoning it in. Poorly written smut ruins a book. Enjoy writing the story for what it is...

Because it's all first person and in chopped up sentences/paragraphs... This should be done mostly from third person, with only some of her thoughts in first person IMO... the way it is now makes it feel wooden...clinical even. Surrounding me again, the one holding me speaks in a joking tone...

That was the oddest 'sex' scene I think I have ever read. Was that spell like, auto ejaculate/zero refractory period/mind control for the guys or something? Cause... that isn't how that would work... unless you're like a queen succubus or something like that... (or whatever it's your book)...