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I mean that is the TL;DR of this, no? I am fairly aware of my potential in writing. I know that I am highly unlikely to have the aptitude to pull it off even if I work hard on it. That is why I offer it, at best someone takes it. At worst, maybe someone gets some ideas to write their novel. I...

I mean the story is meant to be multi-layered. Something like LOTM. The main post is sort of the plot from the writer's point of view. The reader's point of view: Act 1: Slice of life with minor conflict (Everything is all normal on the surface) Act 2: Slice of life first half, psychological...

Your art style is impressive. I like that feeling...it sort of in-between cartoon or comic-like and something else. It is a refreshing sight from everything I am used to seeing every day. The characters also have such depth based on their designs.

I am not one to be able to critique male drawn art. It feels that you are not going for any masculine cool character. It would be that goofy anime character that was mentioned by agentt. The eyes are a bit large for many male character personas in that age range based on my opinion. Is it a...

Hmm, as much as I am experimenting with something here, I am curious about what would be the first impression considering the complexity I am trying to aim for. You could probably choose either the prologue or chapter 1 since they are the pullers in my opinion. Very dialogue-heavy and subjective...

I would say it depends on the context. If you have a small group of characters, you can choose to be more detailed at the start. Then weave small changes in the description later or ignore it altogether. The first impression is probably the biggest deal since if you have many characters...

Hmm so webnovel=first step to popularity? I am sensing a disturbance in the force.

The evolution from 1 star to 3 star, just kidding. Anyways the eyes were meant to be the first one till I realized that it did not fit the current posture once I was done. As for bigger eyes, well it has been a while since I touched last generation eyes. RIP zettai ryouiki

This is for a Chinese character though, so I thought that smaller eyes would be okay. The hair-spreading thing is a bit of a conundrum. As the character is launching a fireball there is inertia, so there would be waves on the clothing and hair and both sides. The difference in lighting is also...

Okays, thank you everybody for the great feedback. Things definitely look much better. I will probably find another time in the future to draw legs and just cheat for now. I did realise that part of the reason why it looked weird was that I forgot to draw the forearm under the sleeve. The...

No more thighs but will these proportions be better?

1: The nose is sort of somewhere near the 7th blade of the fan though. 2: Yeah, the hands are probably a bit too small. 3: Hmm I was drawing based on the perspective of a 13/14 y.o girl though, can't go too illegal. Maybe I should just make her even younger. Then I would lack the excuse to draw...

There is just something not sitting right with me here. I am not sure what, but it is bugging me. I would like some help finding out what that is. Maybe it is the tone, posture or size proportion. I just cannot pick it out. A little help from anyone or a guide/tutorial to drawing would be much...

I don't know how I feel about this. I spent a whole day drawing to realise drawing is pretty fun. Now I don't feel like writing. (╯°□°）╯︵ ┻━┻

What can't a belligerent ant want more than proponents repentant about using quaint ant repellant? Ant is bored.

Quite true, hmm who know maybe I will be motivated to actually write a slice of life. I am not good at those stuff.

Make a bigger hole? Wait then that exposes the butt, how about a bigger hole and a sealing method like velcro or tying a knot.:unsure: Reality tells me to grow a tail first though, so yeah.