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  1. JayMark

    genius. pure genius. You're hired for my creative writing team. The pay is swiss grass, which...

    genius. pure genius. You're hired for my creative writing team. The pay is swiss grass, which you need to harvest yourself, and feed to me.
  2. JayMark

    Deviously perfect.

    Deviously perfect.
  3. JayMark

    Nice grass in this yard. *chews Moooo....

    Nice grass in this yard. *chews Moooo....
  4. JayMark

    Bimbanana, send your army back in time. You can do it.

    Bimbanana, send your army back in time. You can do it.
  5. JayMark

    It takes a villian to braise a child.

    It takes a villian to braise a child.
  6. JayMark

    Now that's a spoiler!

    Now that's a spoiler!
  7. JayMark

    We all live in a village together!

    Milk will spoil and have a bad smell in the sun. I reccomend you use another liquid if you are going for that effect.
  8. JayMark

    Trash Panda Appreciation Thread

  9. JayMark

    [This taking for granted that I have a strong aversion to stories written in first person]

    [This taking for granted that I have a strong aversion to stories written in first person]
  10. JayMark

    Devils advocate from a out of spectrum writer who thinks the very concept of a main character is...

    Devils advocate from a out of spectrum writer who thinks the very concept of a main character is over depended on: don't readers assume the MC is going to have plot armor and be safe somehow anyway, because it is in the writer's best interest to keep the MC alive and continue the story. Plus...
  11. JayMark

    :unsure:

    :unsure:
  12. JayMark

    Nor should it kill the suspense. It feels like a hollow assesement This can be argued with any...

    Nor should it kill the suspense. It feels like a hollow assesement This can be argued with any story where the main character has plot armor. The reader is not wondering 'if' the mc will overcome the situation, but how.
  13. JayMark

    Oh, btw, I don't think such a structure merits any demotion in quality perception whatsoever. It...

    Oh, btw, I don't think such a structure merits any demotion in quality perception whatsoever. It can be done really well. I just don't like it as much as a fresh start story.
  14. JayMark

    There were so many characters and such scale there were unlimited possible outcomes for what the...

    There were so many characters and such scale there were unlimited possible outcomes for what the ending would look like.
  15. JayMark

    I tend to block out anything that makes a narrative less interesting to me. If you tell me the...

    I tend to block out anything that makes a narrative less interesting to me. If you tell me the end, my brain erases it automagically. Unless it's really vague, I didn't mind the little statement at the start of Boku no Hero.
  16. JayMark

    :blob_unamused:

    :blob_unamused:
  17. JayMark

    But both are so freaking long I tended to forget they were intended as foregone conclusion. And...

    But both are so freaking long I tended to forget they were intended as foregone conclusion. And I didn't trust the the gods in the Odyssey. ANd Boku no Hero kept the outcome rather vague of what exactly becoming the greatest hero would specifically look like.
  18. JayMark

    Yeah, that's true.

    Yeah, that's true.
  19. JayMark

    I don't like it either when the author starts at the conclusion, establishes the outcome, and...

    I don't like it either when the author starts at the conclusion, establishes the outcome, and then looks back to start a flashback.
  20. JayMark

    The Last to Comment Wins

    This one probably drank some broken glass.
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