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  1. PeacefulMyst

    feedback for first chapter of my novel

    I kinda am... I didn't expect it to be this obvious though. Gotta work on that. Thanks alot for your help! I highly appreciate it.
  2. PeacefulMyst

    Fuck you

    Fuck you
  3. PeacefulMyst

    Can I Post My Novel Here?

    smuthub* OP is fine just needs to pay the posting fee
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    Writing Chinese Fantasy. What am I supposed to know?

    chinese cultivation novels (preferably MTLs). they give you 100% accurate knowledge of china and how the people their behave and act. Trust me, there's nothing better than cn cultivation novels to know more about china
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    feedback for first chapter of my novel

    https://www.scribblehub.com/read/578131-the-watcher-of-the-abyss/chapter/578139/ Hello! I require some feedback from the eyes of a casual reader on the first chapter of my novel. (Just finished rewriting it. Can't trust myself or my friends for any valid criticism so here I am) Was the...
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    How do you drink your coffee?

    cold with milk and sugar.
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    Can I Post My Novel Here?

    first pay me 100$ as a fee (Im the owner of this site btw.)
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    Nice to see here... Mf

    Nice to see here... Mf
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    red
  10. PeacefulMyst

    Goodbye, my old friend

    welcome comrade
  11. PeacefulMyst

    No Nut November

    indeed i ate my nuts on merely day 2
  12. PeacefulMyst

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    same as above
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    honestly i shouldve just stuck with my original plan and introduced those one by one after much later on but I got a bit to greedy (since a friend of mine said ill get better views if i give a proper backstory early on) anyways i have begun rewriting the chapter. Thanks alot for your help!
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    thanks basically what i needed (I knew it was prob cringe but all my friends said it was fine.) time for a rewrite well that whole comically tragic life was on purpose (since its supposed to be that someone messed with his destiny) But i guess i made a mistake trying to make it sound sad on a...
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    Yet another free feedback thread.

    sorry for that heres the link https://www.scribblehub.com/series/578131/the-watcher-of-the-abyss/
  16. PeacefulMyst

    I had a fear this morning when I woke up

    how do i make my arm numb
  17. PeacefulMyst

    I had a dream

    its calling you
  18. PeacefulMyst

    I had a dream

    are you an overworked programmer by any chance?
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