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  1. Zirrboy

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    "Considered", not "is", at least in my opinion. What I think you lack is ease of reading, but the way it presents itself is an overachievement of what others usually have to work towards. My (and from the looks of it Sailus') approach is figuring out what people wanted to write, then take the...
  2. Zirrboy

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Who would do such a thing... My take is: You have a rare "problem" The things "wrong" with what you write aren't considered as such by most webnovel standards. For most authors I came across, their weaknesses could be described with decent accuracy by either neglecting aspects of scenes or...
  3. Zirrboy

    SH making it unfair for some?

    just means you are more likely to stay alive and conscious for the second round
  4. Zirrboy

    What's the word count limit for a chapter on SH?

    This is one of multiple scripts and those are just what's sent to your browser to allow sophisticated interactions. In this case of the chapter editor. Everything you see there (ideally) would once again be checked on the server in addition to saving/retrieval management.
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    What's the word count limit for a chapter on SH?

    Nvm, looked in the wrong place: "Chapter cannot be longer than 400000 characters" Kind of weird to not check that when saving drafts, but if it works ig.
  6. Zirrboy

    You have very dedicated stalkers and I have the means to encourage their cooperation

    You have very dedicated stalkers and I have the means to encourage their cooperation
  7. Zirrboy

    Why Aren't We Speaking Esperanto

    How do you sell the first phone?
  8. Zirrboy

    I mean the person you wanted to send this to

    I mean the person you wanted to send this to
  9. Zirrboy

    So what'd grey say?

    So what'd grey say?
  10. Zirrboy

    @Amok wait till the withdrawal hits

    @Amok wait till the withdrawal hits
  11. Zirrboy

    Not talking to Anon btw

    Not talking to Anon btw
  12. Zirrboy

    Regrettable, But Necessary

    So am I to understand that, like Paul, the issue is you personally not wanting to write a certain conclusion? I must admit that as a writer, my issue is rather the opposite: Not caring enough to make their strives compelling. But as a reader I agree with the necessity. Sudden and...
  13. Zirrboy

    Pettiest Reason to Dislike a Character?

    And yet you diet.
  14. Zirrboy

    Consider yourself doxxed

    Consider yourself doxxed
  15. Zirrboy

    Convert novel into Kinetic novel using twine or renpy?

    Imo you need love interests with likeable attributes, a protagonist the reader can identify with and sufficiently believable circumstances for them to end up shagging. Those are matters of preference. "Not a deviant" would be one of them. The next person might scream in agony at a "passive goody...
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    Convert novel into Kinetic novel using twine or renpy?

    Why not try your hand at it yourself? Porn isn't trivial to write, but not too hard to do at an enjoyable level and you mentioned the tools already.
  17. Zirrboy

    Even if it's accepted to ask for help, you're still expected to make a reasonable effort to deal...

    Even if it's accepted to ask for help, you're still expected to make a reasonable effort to deal with challenges yourself. Where "reasonable" is always easier to define afterwards by someone who could have helped out than up-front by the inexperienced task receiver. Add to that the...
  18. Zirrboy

    Recommendations Perverted Daddy System (PDS)

    Takes one to know one
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