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  1. Clo

    POVs?

    Try writing in second person as a challenge someday. I did that last semester at Uni for my final portfolio piece. As a D&D GM, it actually came quite naturally to me.
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    Ahah, well, that's the thing with 2d anime renditions of your face—they're flattering!

    Ahah, well, that's the thing with 2d anime renditions of your face—they're flattering!
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    First Arc Popularity Poll

    I voted "child of a slave" — because who better to feel the weight of injustice than someone born beneath it? Now, if you’ll excuse a quick nerd rant on alignment, I’d actually argue your protagonist doesn’t quite fit Chaotic Good as described. Chaotic Good is whimsical. It’s the trickster...
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    What Are Some Parallels you Have Done?

    My entire story is a parallel between the 4 protagonist's reaction to similar events. Heck, with my 16+ guest narrators, it's a parallel between even more than just those 4. So yeah. In a nutshell, it's all my story is about. "What happens when X change?" "Well, that depends on who you are...
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    Is there any advantage in writing a book like talking with the reader?

    One of my favourite movie, Kuffs with Christian Slater, does it all the time. And I love it. Fate Weaver's Legacy, the protagonist Nana talks to the people watching her stream (even though she's Isekai'd), so we get an externalised You that also works very well for the reader. I sometimes...
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    Beware the artist scammers

    It's weirdly funny because they pick the weirdest chapters to tell me they really got a vision to draw X and Y And I am like.. we saw that person once in 98 chapters, mate.
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    Are there any successful SLICE OF LIFE stories?

    Well, many people have made money off slice of life writing, so give it your best!
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    Are there any successful SLICE OF LIFE stories?

    I managed to hit Trending #1 a few times with State of the Art, and it's slice-of-life as heck. What you're measure of "success" exactly? Because if it's making money off of it, pirateaba's The Wandering Inn is certainly succesful in that regard. Bookshops And Bonedust and Legends And Latte by...
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    Pacing questions for everyone.

    I have so much to say about the topic. Pacing is a bit of a passion project of mine. I am extremely long-winded in everything I write, including forum responses. My pacing tends to be slow—glacial, even—because I linger on small details, I give examples. And as a reader, I look for the same...
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    How do they do it?

    I post about 3 chapters a week. 1 more my new story, which gets posted day-of, because this one is mostly a project I started as a fun experiment. 2 chapters get posted on State of the Art. But I edit them before I post. I also write ideally 2 new chapters for State of the Art, so my backlog...
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    What is your secret potion?

    Chronic lack of sleep. Would not recommend.
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    Plot questions for everyone.

    Interestingly, as a game dev and fan of simulations and AI, I like to think of "character-driven" stories as emergent stories. Plot-driven to me is when the author has something to tell, and they ignore how "fake" their characters' reactions have to be, because it's needed to railroad the story...
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    Is it worth going back to split up larger chapters?

    I hear Pirateaba of The Wandering Inn fame is also hitting those 80k words chapters in length. As you said, book in its own right! xD
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    Oh hi! Can I help you? I'm such a huge fan of the Japanese-style emojis, as an aside.

    Oh hi! Can I help you? I'm such a huge fan of the Japanese-style emojis, as an aside.
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    New MMORPG Novel

    My only (serious) advice for OP: MMO novels or VRMMOs are not trending right now. Either make it normal fantasy, or plan to use the fact it's a game (for example, people logging because life sucks, or they log out because they need to decompress, or eat) My own story is a VRMMO one, but like...
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    Blocking “reverse world” stories

    1994's Maverick with Mel Gibson, Jodie Foster and James Garner. Poker tournament movie, it's very good (tm)!
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    Blocking “reverse world” stories

    Does Maverick count as a western? Because if so, that would be mine.
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    How many of you actually manually use em-dashes?

    I'm 46 and French Canadian—not that it matters—and use Em-dashes all over the place. ('Tis just the way the neurodivergent brain thinks). Of course, I use other methods, such as commas or patenthesis, roughly as frequently... But!— —But I find the one place I can't easily replace them is when...
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    So, what do you do in your free time.

    Reading, Gran Turismo 7, Board games, Final Fantasy XI, or writing another story. Sometimes baking cookies or home-made bread.
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    State of the Art is trending in first place!

    Wait, what, it's back..? I don't understand..!
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