Search results

But, you can...one hoof(?) things right?

You bald?

Been editing through an old manuscript. Really makes it obvious how much ive improved

Not bad! Squats...yeah I should be doing those

Awwwww

It helps me internally shame myself for being lazy. I run 3 times a week. 2.6 miles about. Pace hovers around 11mins.

Family drama so crazy that I just gave away the giftcard I was gonna mail to my brother 😭

First one sound kinda meh, not to my tastes. Second one though...that has potential. Only if the reader can tell what games are being references. Like Elden Ring becomes Olden Circle, Super Mario becomes Duper Lario, Final Fantasy becomes Last Daydream ect. Its only fun if the reader knows...

I have many thoughts. In general, this question could be applied to music, art, anything creative. For me. I truly love art. I collect physical art from locals in my community. I commission art. Ive been reading forever. Own hundreds of books. I buy all my own music from the artists, large and...

No problem! Its an interesting start! I think if you tighten it up a bit you'll hook readers hard.

Overall, not bad at all! But, I have some issues with the prose. There's a few too many "fluff" words that get in the way of the action and flow of the scene. Let me show you. In general I don't like filler words like these. Buut sometimes you have to use them, just be aware that they're...

Might as well make it a fountain statue 🤣

❤️❤️ You're such a dear. With everything calmed down maaaaybe we can get back to basics. I haven't gotten a new dress in awhile too. So you have styles that work with tails ?🙏

Hmmmm. Im less familiar. They like sports and cars...maybe Tran femmes really love linux and programming. And unlistenable electronic music.😆