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  1. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    thanks,i am not demotivated , i just want to have a clear conversation. my english is not that bad i just recheck my long writting somtimes so that my thought wont feel odd or hard to understand . i am always greatfull to every one thoughts , its so nice to see people crtitic AI usage and want...
  2. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    hello there, i get your concern over AI usage, you might have been taken this other way around , i mentioned i didn't use ai for reply because someone accused me of using AI to reply my comments , he might have been using ai detector too much because some ai detector flagg human writing to ai...
  3. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    Thankyou so much for your lovely feedbacks, and I know what you are pointing out too the thing is I was about to do exactly what you've described when I were writing the initial chapters but the chapter one is not a full chapter or a full scenario you see the first chapter is what kael is...
  4. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    thanks i'll remember it , and as a matter of fact i've just rewrite the full chapter if you like you can read it again chapter 3 https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1745597/ hope you will like it and please do read latter chapters thankyou so much again 💕.
  5. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    "Thank you so much! I immensely appreciate it. This is my very first novel, and I want it to be deep; I want the reader to feel a sense of immersion and depth through my main character. As you mentioned, my narration leaked into 'omniscient' territory there. I didn’t even realise it at the...
  6. Shanikumar

    want some thoughts to my dystopian hindu mythology novel

    "Thank you for reaching out with your concern—I completely understand why you might ask that, especially with how common AI tools are becoming. However, I stand by my statement: THIS STORY IS NOT AI GENRATED OR HAVE ANY ROLE IN STORY . Here is the distinction: I use AI tools exclusively for...
  7. Shanikumar

    want some thoughts to my dystopian hindu mythology novel

    hey thankyou so much for your time and thoughts i am so happy you shared your insight appriciated. i know it did may have feel abrupt and dull since i havent revealed much but the following chapter will change your thoughts and you will find mc way of thinking and his action are not as typical...
  8. Shanikumar

    want some thoughts to my dystopian hindu mythology novel

    hey thanks for being here, i want your thoughts on my novel DARKER OBSSEION:- https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1731575/darker-obsession and thanks again for your time💖
  9. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    That would be nice , and thankyou for your cohesive advice, Appreciated 🙇 And thanks❤️
  10. Shanikumar

    Looking feedback for my novel darker obsession a dystopian hindu mythical story

    Hello, I had thoughts of writting frictional novel using hindu mythology and lore for a long time and i did here in scribble hub i want feedback on Charecter, world building, pacing and Power l. even a small comment of your would be very helpful and appreciated. Thankyou for being here 💙❤️...
  11. Shanikumar

    NEED THOUGHTS!

    Your thought are so valubal valubal for me to improve I know my level https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1731575/darker-obsession/ New chapter 12 :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/2031644/ Please do share your Thoughts!❣️ Thankyou for your Time and Thankss...
  12. Shanikumar

    "Seeking Feedback – Darker Obsession Chapter 11 (Honest Critique Appreciated!)"

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1731575/darker-obsession/ Lastest CHAPTER 11:- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1966484/ Thanks a lot for being please do give your valuable feedback as it helps me to keep improve my work and the novel Thanks again ❣️ and...
  13. Shanikumar

    Latest chapter has been released of DARKER OBSESSION need FEDBACK on it and should I add illustration too please let me know ?

    Hey thanks for being here and here is the latest chapter ? Chapter 9 :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1897292/ Please do give your feedbacks and let me know, should I add illustration too and please do check the series thanks again for being here ❣️
  14. Shanikumar

    Need an honest opinion about letest chapter of my dark fantasy supernatural ? novel weather it's harsh or brutal

    Thanks much appreciated, although if you want a really true excpirince of this story you should Read from begining and thanks again, I'll definately check out your novel and give you feedback soon ❣️ Who man your first chapter is like blast So basically, the first chapter throws you straight...
  15. Shanikumar

    Need an honest opinion about letest chapter of my dark fantasy supernatural ? novel weather it's harsh or brutal

    Thanks for being here please do read the latest chapter Chapter no.8 :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1875884/ Thanks again and plese read the novel from begining for batter understanding thanks a lot ❣️
  16. Shanikumar

    DARKER OBSESSION chap.7 has been released please do give your honest feedback on this novel chapter whether it's harsh or uplifting ?

    Thankyou for being here Please do read the whole series from chapter 1 that way you Will understand the story more precisely And plese do give you feedback and review on chapter 7 :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1805741/ Thankyou once again.❣️
  17. Shanikumar

    NEW CHAPTER OF DARKER OBSESSION HAS BEEN RELEASED PLEASE DO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE FEDBACK WEATHER ITS HARSH TRUTH OR SUGGESTION.??

    Thanks for your fact and being considerate about it , and let me tell you somthing first when I saw that review I also thought it might be AI generated as it's reflect some future chapter essences in his bottom line review and i don't know about that, and abdirah is not a tamil name it is more...
  18. Shanikumar

    NEW CHAPTER OF DARKER OBSESSION HAS BEEN RELEASED PLEASE DO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE FEDBACK WEATHER ITS HARSH TRUTH OR SUGGESTION.??

    Hi there, Thanks for taking the time to check out my chapter and share your thoughts. I understand your concerns about formatting and readability — you're absolutely right, and I appreciate you pointing that out. And yes I deliberately post it in wrong subform just so I get some honest...
  19. Shanikumar

    NEW CHAPTER OF DARKER OBSESSION HAS BEEN RELEASED PLEASE DO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE FEDBACK WEATHER ITS HARSH TRUTH OR SUGGESTION.??

    Darker obsession chapter 6 :- https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1731575-darker-obsession/chapter/1775173/ Thanks so much for being here please do your feedback thankyou we'll meet soon !
  20. Shanikumar

    NEED FEEDBACK ON LATEST CHAPTER OF MY NOVEL" DARKER OBSESSION" NEW CHAPTER IS OUT NOW

    So it's my very first novel and very first' try to write I need feedback about my story characters and the overall flow, I want honest feedback weather it's harsh brutal or elegant whatever you think about it please let me now , and please do Read DARKER OBSESSION it's I am sure you like it ...
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