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  1. SquadCammander354

    It drives the plot. It's like that one show where the first 3 episodes were nothing but thoughts...

    It drives the plot. It's like that one show where the first 3 episodes were nothing but thoughts on the main characters head. None of those events occurred yet it was able to drive the plot in it's first reveal!
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    Continue it with more material, them leave some blank spaces.

    Continue it with more material, them leave some blank spaces.
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    There's not that many community games so you'll find it.

    There's not that many community games so you'll find it.
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    I DID, also it's on this site. >w<)

    I DID, also it's on this site. >w<)
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    Just go to it and help with spreading the game; please! QAQ

    Just go to it and help with spreading the game; please! QAQ
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    What game mechanic would you use to write a story around?

    The one on the second page, where I didn't quote anyone.
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    What game mechanic would you use to write a story around?

    Yes, for instance, one may be used to fighting right-handed people, but not the left. Simple things yet it makes it all the more important. Like the [Heavy Armor] skill, get that out of here. It's impossible to do that unless you use the skill [Mana Manipulation] or [Spirit Resonance]. The...
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    To another thread, I made a community game. Please follow throw with it, as a fellow "writer".

    To another thread, I made a community game. Please follow throw with it, as a fellow "writer".
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    What about the thing with the text? Or is that a bit too much? QwQ

    What about the thing with the text? Or is that a bit too much? QwQ
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    What game mechanic would you use to write a story around?

    In this case, don't make his growth go "skyrocket" in speed. Instead develop his skills, as he has the advantage if the system. Make "world energy" a reason for people to keep fighting. The stronger beasts they fight, the more one will grow; yet even then it would take centuries to overthrow the...
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    What game mechanic would you use to write a story around?

    This is why I like Korean writing. Because of their culture and society, some are able to write profound yet simple stories.
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    What game mechanic would you use to write a story around?

    For this reason, I feel like it would be best to have arks or volumes to a story. That way the audience has something to look forward to because they know that something is coming, but it won't be rushed. Creating things in bulk is never a good decision, that's why you have to plan and "drag"...
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    How much detail can there be in graphic scenes, before it becomes too much?

    For information that went unsaid. You can find out many things by going through a man's wallet.
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    What game mechanic would you use to write a story around?

    Perhaps the system that's so prominent in games. But if we use this mechanic, a story has to be short but long enough that it doesn't oversaturate itself. I felt like that's what happened with "A Monster Who Levels Up", where even though the story was over 200 chapters long, it started looking...
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    *they're both asleep* '-') Why did you even try?

    *they're both asleep* '-') Why did you even try?
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    She said she had model work, and that she had a husband. Maybe she's talking about her avi.

    She said she had model work, and that she had a husband. Maybe she's talking about her avi.
  17. SquadCammander354

    Choose Your Story

    Good, now summon people to help.
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    Choose Your Story

    Make the text type 15 so it looks big.
  19. SquadCammander354

    Choose Your Story

    However you could also put it in a spoiler.
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