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You ruined my pancakes, now I see them with this...

Yes?

*Pokes otoko*

*Gives a carrot*

Lol, that has nothing to do with my novel.(Except the blood slaves. Ahem.)

Can you define that? The Japanese part I mean.

https://www.grammarly.com/ That may help you a bit.

Hmm, you can expect Erin to go for the humans. But that will be more dark. There will be more killings for sure. You can say she will continue her training with killing. Erin's pesonality in the future might take some changes as well. That's what I can tell you. About the other things, you will...

It's about time for me to make a feedback for my novel. This is the first novel I am writing, I will appreciate some form of directions as of what will be good in the future to see. I need more ideas for the general direction of the novel. Of course, other feedbacks will be appreciated as well...

SH of course... It's separated from the forum.