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  1. Keene

    Daily Wins Mega Thread

    Finally back up to benching 80kg for 5x5. Will settle on it for a few weeks and then begin the push to 90kg. I'm sure I'll eventually reach 100kg, but right now it seems like an impossibly heavy weight ? If I can get there in 18-24 months I'll be more than happy!
  2. Keene

    First Person or Third Person

    This is typically why so many romance/erotica novels will use first person, and epic fantasy use third person. If anyone has an example of an epic fantasy using 1st person I would love to see it!
  3. Keene

    New writing/reading platform for authors to publish/earn from their serialized novels! We have a...

    New writing/reading platform for authors to publish/earn from their serialized novels! We have a roadmap of the planned features here :)
  4. Keene

    Has a few video artifacts as a result of ShareX bugging out ?

    Has a few video artifacts as a result of ShareX bugging out ?
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    After spending 18+ months programming the base functionality and systems... finally ready to...

    After spending 18+ months programming the base functionality and systems... finally ready to start building out the most important functionality, the ability to create novels! But first.. reworked the form to have some nicer dropdowns when creating a new board for an authors community/guild:
  6. Keene

    Your favorite couple in fictional media.

    Stepping away from anime/novels, I think Rose and Bernard's relationship in LOST was one of the most genuine and well written relationships shown on TV. Spoiler:
  7. Keene

    Daily Wins Mega Thread

    Dream sleep? 7pm -> 4am gives me a good 9 hours every night. Plenty of dreams to be had!
  8. Keene

    Daily Wins Mega Thread

    Today marks the 32nd day of me getting up at 4am and going to the gym before work. Been strict with my bedtime at 7pmish every day also. My old PB of the daily gym grind was 14 days so I'm happy to have smashed it. Aiming for 100 days now!
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    Thank you! Been floating around for a while, decided to start posting again :) Hopefully soon...

    Thank you! Been floating around for a while, decided to start posting again :) Hopefully soon might put one of my novels up!
  10. Keene

    Writing Cause then effect or effect then cause?

    Tyranny of Steel I think is a good example. If my memory is correct there are multiple times battle scenes are shown from the POV of the attacking medieval army where the writing shows: Cause: Fist size holes appearing in everyone - dropping down dead, limbs blown off, whistles of bullets...
  11. Keene

    A new hidden gem I found and currently translating

    Not to make any judgements on this particular novel, but if you as a writer have needed to clarify to new readers "Don't give up! Read the first X chapters then it really gets good!" it's a big red flag for your own writing. IMO a novel should set broadly the tone, genre and type in the first...
  12. Keene

    What kind of fantasy battles are the most interesting to you?

    Honestly I had yet to see a fantasy story that can authentically present a believable military theory over the use of tamed winged creatures as airborne troops. If anyone know of any, please let me know!
  13. Keene

    Writing Cause then effect or effect then cause?

    This makes me think that this style of writing would be really effective in a POV battle scene. The effect, an injury or lost limb, is described first and then the characters mental processing of how it happened. Thinking about it, I'm pretty sure this is how I've seen it done in the countless...
  14. Keene

    Uncomfortable with beauty.

    I think the main problem that can arise is when a characters beauty, and other characters reactions to it - is all there is. A character whose romance or general plot revolves around something not really in their control - their physical appearance - makes typically for a boring plot because...
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    Writing Cause then effect or effect then cause?

    Consider this effect: The man is woken up. And this cause: A brick is thrown through the man's window. What's better: The mans eyes snapped open (effect) as the brick was thrown through his window (cause). The brick smashed through the mans window (cause), waking him with a start (effect)...
  16. Keene

    Writing doesn’t bring joy anymore

    Quoted for truth. I wasted many years before I truly understood the power of discipline - of no longer relying on a short term dopamine hit or burst of motivation to do something - and instead start prioritizing hard, but achievable long term goals with delayed payoff and gratification.
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    That feeling when you accidentaly delete a 4k word chapter and realize you didnt save it elsewhere

    And this is why the cloud is now king ? Pretty sure most writing software whether its Word or Scrivener will have multiple ways to set up automatic saving to some cloud service such as Dropbox or One. Make sure to set it up!
  18. Keene

    Creating a Visual Novel!

    I strongly advise you to just stick with bog standard HTML, CSS and JS for now. Node is sort of antiquated now and sufficiently complicated and confusing for a newbie I wouldn't advise looking into it. As you become familiar and comfortable with writing HTML files, styling with CSS and adding...
  19. Keene

    Beta readers needed [CLOSED]

    I'm interested, count me in.
  20. Keene

    Does this actually work?

    I would go a step further and say this is an essential skill to develop if you want to be a good writer. Too many people see writing as an activity than can only be undertaken when they are hit by a sudden stroke of motivation or flash of genius. These same people rarely write much at all and...
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