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Depression... JK Indolent?

If an actual system were ever put in place over me, I would do my utmost to be rid of it. To me, the implications of having a system equate to a sort of forced limitation, and a sort of Tyrannical imprisonment, rather than freedom or power. If you are under such a system, you are subject to it's...

New chapter made me think of this. Any other things it made people think of? (Also doubles as unasked for advertising for the author)

It would be a bad idea to avoid failure. You don't learn from success near as well. For the most part, no it wouldn't change my actions too much on account of cumulative failure culminates resiliency and success in the long run. It highly depends not only on how far out you see, but also what...

Usually CYOA stories tend to be sub-par in the writing department. Each plot point is geared towards a branching choice rather than focusing on being a cohesive journey where one is really impacted by the thoughts and actions of the characters. Really, the main character becomes the reader...

I conduct myself with proper indignity. (And a smidge of alcohol) Thank you very much!

I was once a bully to those whom I thought were sinners.

No parent trap type shenanigans! *Sigh* Disappointing. *Edit: Also with multiverse theory this COULD be a universe in which she never was betrayed. Technically she's getting vengeance on people who don't deserve it, at least not yet.

When it comes to short stories, I pick an abstract idea, concept, or phrase I want to explore; I then write my characters and story with that in mind. I often think of characters with contrasting views on the subject as a sort of "conflict" and let my MC work through their own existential...

What is interesting is that I have heard typing on a computer uses a different part of the brain then writing by hand with pen & paper. Steam actually has their own writing software called Nimble Writer I think. (Just to give you another option not listed yet.)

Self described magical girl of love and justice. But what kind of justice? That's the scary part... Scary or not, AliceShiki is a wonderful person.

Well, in marketing class you're generally talking about a product you can mass produce. Writing is (generally) an art form, where the goal is usually to produce something with a unique brand of spirit. You CAN apply the principals of marketing to writing. That's how you get mass series written...

You are writing a story purely for reader's online engagement? It's not my style, but since you have clearly defined your goal, the only advice I can give is to remember that the masses are generally lazy. Give them minor input and they (may) be alright. But if you overload them with direct...

All that kind of thing proves to me is how utterly pathetic that commenter is. Someone who wastes their time on reading something they don't like, while insulting and cursing someone, is actually pitiable. I wouldn't even be mad, I just feel ashamed for them. They're not worth talking seriously.

So the contest is a royal fluff piece? The queen's mere image garners respect in various corners of the world. Something like this sounds like mere bootlicking. A disappointing topic. I liked your misinterpretation better.

No matter what I eat, I still sometimes pretend it's alive and begging for it's life while eating it...

Why eat them? When you can make them cry pearls constantly until you are a very wealthy individual... :blobspearpeek:

Honestly, I like recovering your memories later as an adult, because it would give you a sense of identity and belonging in the world you reside that is incomparable to the other two. If you start with full memory and personality intact, you may have a harder time connecting in it to the people...

It surprises me you've been married for 30 years, yet don't take your wife on the occasional date. Perhaps you do, but can't consider it "modern" for intents and purposes. Needless to say, I've been with the same person a few years and I usually take her out on a date once or twice a month...

I can't say much for your desires, but I believe genuine lasting love is based on each person truly respecting and admiring the other followed by physical attraction. My suggestion would be to start platonically and go slowly. begin with coming up with reasons for both of your characters to...