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Cheeseburger and fries.

I'm way past even pantser, I'm fully into coked-out squirrel territory here.

It's fine, to be honest, yours was the nicest out of the three. I had one where I was told my story was like reading a child getting SA for laughs, I actually almost deleted everything and quit over that one.

I looked back at my old comments it wasn't you. I actually canceled my request in your thread after I got three bad reviews in a row.

No I don't think so, you haven't read my novel to the best of my knowledge. Yeah it was rough but I kept writing anyway.

Yeah that one was fun. But not all of them are good I stopped asking for feedback after getting this. "Overall: your story is simply boring. The lack of description, boring writing, meh pacing, and plot are nothing that attract me. There is no clear plot, no burning questions that make me go...

I have a chapter in my book where my MC bakes cupcakes, and a few chapters later she rips the balls off a troll... Needless to say, I have a lot of weird going on in my head so I doubt you'd surprise me.

This is my favorite. This story is like cutting the head of a chicken the giving the body ultimate power and watching it bumble about doing random stuff.

Don't worry I'll be gentle.

I'm gonna go with ye olde hand cannon first.

Thanks, most people just think I'm annoying. I've found that readers will only comment if you post something controversial, most of my slice-of-life chapters only have a TFTC comment. Are you sure you want the eyes from beyond to gaze upon your story?

Dwarves.

Well, it feels like a lifetime ago now but I was involved in the Iraqi invasion so there are a few things I wish I'd never seen.

Comments are my favorite thing as an author so I make sure to leave them on any story I read.

I dropped a barebones review I’ll expand it when more of the story comes out. So far it’s great keep up the good work!

I'm sorry in advance for any mental trauma it may cause.