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Oh, well maybe? Act 1 is more light-hearted and character driven. It's 64 chapters. Act 2 is when the plot shifts to something more serious. Not like Berserker serious, but it's a change in tone compared to Act 1. But I make sure to give breaks so that the characters shine though. Too much...

You are incredibly wise, miss (or mister) :blob_aww: It's not just readers that influence it, some of them are friends. They enjoyed the story before when I first wrote it, but this second version isn't going well for them. In my attempt to add more events to Act 1, I guess it made them more...

Oooh, narrative betrayals like what? Act 2 involves a reveal that puts the MC's adorable personality in a grim light when looking back.

Oh my brothers suck too, I have a restraining order toward my parents and second oldest brother :blob_catflip::blobrofl: only my little brother and I are on good terms and keep in touch. He's a wittle softie :blob_melt: And thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me :blob_aww...

I could use some advice ^^ my current story is nearing its end of Act 2, but so far I'm receiving mixed/negative feedbacks from a few friends reading act 1. I understand their complaints, but it's a lot of feedback x) I plan on going back and rewriting Act 1 to improve on it. There's a sharp...

Last time my dad saw me writing, he tore up my pages and shared some not very positive thoughts about me spending my time with silly hobbies x) Mom didn't care, she would gossip to her friends about me wasting my time writing when I can't even read well. And my brothers use to make fun of it but...

Interesting glitch! You should keep playing, see if you find any more bugs that may seem out of the ordinary :blob_popcorn: let us know what you find.

You're the best kind of reader for doing that ❤️

Oooo I like your suggestion, but um, what would I add for Polls? Hmm, maybe a vote for your favorite character? My story follows a cat girl and her past coming back to haunt her :sweat_smile: and it includes romance, smut, magic,medieval fantasy and action scenes. Maybe it's cuz I just got...

Ezio still is my favorite Assassin :blob_gift:

Well now I have to check your writing :love: awesome!

Did we just become best friends? :blob_gift:

Just a lack of comments x) I have good views but I wish people would be more vocal and comment more. I like being social :blob_melt: maybe it's cuz it has a smut tag that people get shy? Idk.

You think the Lego Batman game is terrible? :blob_shock: Kidding :blob_wink: It's Baldurs Gate 3. Favorite TV show? Hmm... idk, Better Call Saul was the last TV show I really liked, maybe that one? I see more Anime than Television shows x) Baldurs Gate 3, idk if it needs a defense. It got Game...

Aww, thanks for taking a chance on it :blob_melt::blob_gift:

If you insist ^^ I'd like to recommend my story, Monster Girls Book 1: A Tale of Tails. A fantasy based around Medieval Times full of Magic and Monsters, the story centers around a young farmer with a past he'd like to forget as he rescues a cat girl who's lost memory of her past. They quickly...

See we belong in the slums, you and I :blob_evil: our content is too spicy, and they can't handle our hotness :blob_nom: I'd love to share my work over there for the readership popularity, but my story ideas are Monster Girls centered in a Medieval Fantasy setting with smut + story x) so... I...

I think i have a narrative style, though I can't quite tell you what it is x) idk, I never took courses for writing nor was I taught by someone else. I just liked reading, even if my dyslexia made me a slow reader. And I like reading/watching stories through books, Mangas, comics, and animated...

10/10, everyone else's work pales in comparison to mine! :blob_evil: Okay maybe not that high x) I'd rate my stuff a 6 or 7. Its good entertainment but since my characters are all rookies in the magic department, they don't have a lot of abilities... at least not yet :devilish:

I vote for #2!