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On a plus side, you are clearly able to pull people in. You pull people into this world where they don't have to think that cruelty is bad or down with the monarchy or I hate rich people let all of them did, and stuff like that.

There are just a lot of ways this story can go, and I hope you would understand this, but a big part of my mind bets that it would be a typical Isekai where the MC keeps killing people but the cruelty is justified everytime; and villains are just MC but more evil which makes the MC look better.

Awa, it's not lying, but it's not the truth either. Themes of possessions avert me a bunch, so I am cherry picking from that a bit. A raw brutal review would be, "Looks promising, but isn't for me."

And ah, as I mentioned in your comments, I struggle establishing the plot in my story. I struggle moving the plot forward. So I do wanna learn from you how you manage that. Like is there a mini boss I can expect who upon defeat will reveal the final boss. I don't really know any other way of...

Mnh, so, as typical it is, it is set in middle ages. And cats are godlike creatures. They are feared and all.

With how the story is going, I would like to see yearnings of this near immortal MC, and hope our evil spirit has more personality than just being cruel.

I am very envious of your formatting skills, that is one thing I wish I could just steal from ya.

Writing wise as well, it is interesting to see how our styles differ. I focus more on dialogue while you on atmosphere. And you have done a good job with it. And looking at the comments, I am glad your readers are able to really delve into it.

I think the story is quite sad and, I am kinda struggling on seeing it any different way. But I recognise that I am not really the target audience here. Possessions and cruelty are iffy for me.

>.> A question on which my marriage depends on-

Also I am stealing the meme below.

Darling darling, now that sleepy is sick, we have a chance to finally eat some ice cream in peace!

*throws in another layer of blanket*

Why did you write "bored is I" XD

Sleepy entered the mirror dimension! Oh no!

Gah! Is that why you are in a blanket!

*nuzzles* I came across some drama mn ;-; Two of my friends are fighting.

*holds and snuggles the tiny @sleepandeatallday* waaa baby boop