I want to share my second story here! following the Metus Contest!:blob_popcorn:
(Desperately need a review since this is my first time writing with this genre and style of writing.)
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/166752/the-queen-of-darkness/
Yep, since I said that I'm interested in the theme of the current contest, here you go AND I need a review because this is my first time writing horror and with this style of writing. :blob_popcorn:
https://www.scribblehub.com/series/166752/the-queen-of-darkness/
I like using sound effect but not too much.
I mixed it with the descriptive sentence as well.
Well, in my opinion, it depends on how you will use that sound effect...