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What a speed run lol. Anyways I just want to know why you only have few readers here, when you're story is so interesting and fits the mainstream well. I really liked you're prologue. The heaviness, hopelessness, the bond of the two was thoroughly shown in the dialogue. Hopefully, old Bajie...

I can't sleep a wink whenever I am traveling cuz I fear that I would wake up in heaven, or hell, after our vehicle crashed or something. So, travelling is really a torture to me.

Wait for a while you two, I'll do my tasks first.

A year of writting and you're already giving up you're creative powers to the technological advances of our enemy, the great AI!? But, seriously you should write and read more if you feel that you're lacking. Your imaginations is being limited by your perception. Another thing is that you can...

Same with the first review. I think you're a veteran already! But if I tried to nitpick something it was probably the long paragraphs in the part where he described his ritual. The mood you set in the prologue, the mystery and cultic vibes, were overshadowed by the scientificality of the ritual...

This is just my opinion dude, so yeah taste it with a grain of salt or something of that quote. First your setting description is good. It paints the scenery in my mind well. However, after few paragraphs while I was reading I noticed sometjimg incongruent with the prose. When I looked closer...

Trying to add 'Feedback Giver' to my life achievements.

I don't think I have something to criticize from your work. Maybe just this one here, from your prologue: How come the door made a creaking sound when it should be a sudden sound as it was kicked open. You can use descriptions instead of onomatopoeias, just a suggestion though you do you...

I am bored and kinda want to try this thing. So yeah, let me look at your goodies I'll poison test them and write my prescriptions or something—I'm unreliable though don't expect too much. Oh yeah, no smut. My junior was already filing complaints, so cut me some slack. Also, no fan-fic cuz I...

Same, MTL are much better nowadays. What SoL are you reading rn? Or any recommendations. It is hard to find good ones in this economy. Currently, I caught up with Brother Dao - the acting one - its mtl version.

Second cuz there's a cute girl.

Damn, satan calm down. Please appear later I still need to ask God for a blessing for my exams.

I can't degrade you, what if you track my home and blow it up with a missile? Such time nowadays, sigh~ Congrajuslahditoanftions, more writing to you!

I rarely read on scribble or RR, mostly CN web novels. I usually wait until they reached 500+ or if its completed.

Maybe that reader didn't read enough Japanese Isekais? This is the bad thing with reading too many CN wn, they are filled with mc's who kills decisively.

The magic words did not work! *shocked pichuka*

If you comment after this you gae

Ah, didn't saw that its about cover. I meant to say that you should add numbers, i.e Chapter 1. Sorry, anyways... A Place To Bloom - From your title the first thing that comes to mind is greenery. A verdant grassfield where flowers seemed to bloom every spring. Yet, from you're cover it tells...

Nope, you're not.

Maybe add some chapter numbers?