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  1. Brandondee

    Thoughts on Mashle: Magic and Muscles

    I liked it but the final arc started dragging too much and I stopped reading it
  2. Brandondee

    What is an anti-hero?

    This video pretty much explains it https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EWFbQMYfpX0
  3. Brandondee

    Does this premise sound good?

    I'd read a story about someone trying to prove that Florida Man exists and is responsible for all the weird things that happen in the state
  4. Brandondee

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Fair enough
  5. Brandondee

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    "When a nuclear holocaust wipes out most of the population, it just makes more sense to directly trade goods and services instead of handing people worthless pieces of paper". You cut off the rest of the sentence. I don't see an issue here. Thanks for catching that typo for me. It should've...
  6. Brandondee

    Tips or advice with locations and fights scenes

    Just imagine that you’re in the fight. Describe what you see, what actions you’re taking, the smells around you and how you feel about what’s happening. Think about what tools the character has at their disposal and what you would do in that situation to win the fight
  7. Brandondee

    System novels are annoying

    I was talking about Player Manager on RR, but I’ll check that one out too
  8. Brandondee

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Hi, I only have 2 chapter up so far but I’d appreciate some feedback. You can post it here https://www.scribblehub.com/series/609610/the-radland/
  9. Brandondee

    A new chapter of The Radland is out!

    They'll get the hang of it eventually (y)
  10. Brandondee

    Writing Prompt Write a story in 6 words

    Wrote a story. Nobody read it.
  11. Brandondee

    NaNoWriMo's a'Coming

    One day left until the nightmare fun begins :s_smile:
  12. Brandondee

    System novels are annoying

    I used to not like them but I’ve started to come around on them over the past couple of weeks. I think that it appeals to me more when they use a system in an interesting way. For example, I’m reading a story on another site about a system that helps a guy to understand and manage a soccer team...
  13. Brandondee

    A new chapter of The Radland is out!

    The second chapter of this pulse-pounding saga is out now. All the cool kids are checking it out :cool: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/609610-the-radland/chapter/610201/
  14. Brandondee

    I’m famous mow

    What's it like being a celebrity?
  15. Brandondee

    Your last played Video Game character has to kill you in 24hrs

    Byleth is literally a god, so what chance do I have of surviving?
  16. Brandondee

    The Radland

    Thanks for checking it out :)
  17. Brandondee

    The Radland

    Chickens have beaks lol. It’s supposed to be the handle of a machete. Thanks
  18. Brandondee

    Writing 5 tips for writing more

    I always listened to music while I wrote and I thought that it helped me get in the zone. But very recently I’ve realized that music is actually a distraction and I can get more done when I’m not listening to it.
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