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So, I'm writing a story where magic, abilities, different races (aka different types of magic) are involved. My initial plan was to slowly explain the power system to readers through the story itself. Initially I hadnt even written a prologue. But right before publishing I looked at other...

Is anyone really winning?:blob_hmm_two:

I am probably too late. But how can I turn down your offer for a free promo :blob_aww: . My first ever story: Strongest Mage in History Genre: Magic, Fantasy. I dont really know how to sell the story without spoiling things I have planned. :blob_hmm_two:

Im winning by hoping tempokai is writing my roast.

Healing factor. But it works on the basis of how fatal the wound is. I fall and scrape my knee? It heals normally. I get shot in the head? It heals instantly. Fever? Im sick for a few days. About to get respiratory cancer? Suddenly I have the lung capacity of an olympic swimmer.

thats so cheesy

I am :blob_salute:

Writing....

Username: Roney - just an alias ig? It has some elements of my real name. Pfp: Its kim dokja, he is a reader just like I was before I started writing. And the reason I started writing was because I found out that ORV started as a web/lightnovel.

Throwing my hat in the ring.

So I didnt read your story yet. But just from the page as a reader I would tell you I probably wouldnt go into a chapter from that page. Reasons being. Both your poster and synopsis doesnt really give me anything to go off of. Even when im at a bookstore buying books I look at the cover and read...

No worries man. I just started writing a month ago as well. I use pc (google docs+pwa) and it is so easy to keep track off. You'll be good to go once your laptop is running again.

Hello good sir. I have already recieved some feedback from two kind souls. I came across this thread just now and think someone ripping into my work would be great so that I can improve in the earlier stages of my story. If you are still doing these: Strongest Mage in History

So, I'm not a professional writer, and my only familiarity with Star Wars comes from the prequel trilogy. So, take my review with a grain of salt. I like the main character. Very Deadpool/Johnny Storm/Peter Quill vibes. Loved the storm troopers, first time I have seen them in such a manner. The...

Since my school days I have always thought of various plot lines that I would then go and tell my friends about. So yes there is like a book filled with various story ideas. It is only now years later that I finally decided to actually sit down and write one of those stories about a month ago...

Omg thank you so much. I thought using grammarly meant that my texts wouldnt have grammatical issues but it seems I was wrong. I will keep these points during the revision and for future chapters. ? Ah okay ill try to keep that in mind:blob_salute:

Thank you for your kind words. Can I ask if you think whether its too dialogue heavy? Should I just move on with the plot instead of including so much chat?

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I literally just began writing and would love an honest review. I want to know if there is too much dialogue and if it's paced decently. Strongest Mage in History

So I am a new writer. By new I mean I just writing around a month ago. I used to always come up with plotlines that I would tell my friends and families but never did anything with them until now. I decided to go with a easier plot to start my writing journey. After writing for more than a...