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  1. Armored99

    In your honest opinion how should Berserk end

    Don't know didn't read it.
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    Walking is the dark souls of crawling

    Walking is the dark souls of crawling
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    I offer free feedback. (Closed)

    Just came here to be controversial, You misspelled Thriller as triller, and I think by urban stories you might mean 'slice of life'. Also why did you put 'fantasy with action' if you weren't going to put fantasy with no action?
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    made a stupid mistake.

    How many chapters/words? I read that and reworked 25k words, but now that I've reread it again I feel like I might need to rewrite 31k.
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    Ways to limit power escalation

    Just have patches that change the meta. That could actually be an Idea for an Litrpg novel. People living in a world where every couple years it gets a re-balancing patch. One thing you can do is just make people die/leave/disappear once they become to powerful. Cultivation novels like to...
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    Elon Musk Bought Twitter

    Hopefully he improves it or destroys it.
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    Writing [Tutorial] Plot Devices: Deus Ex Machina, Chekhov's Gun & Foreshadowing

    I feel like this was made do to my comment on your last thread, but I might just be a little narcissistic in thinking so. my previous comment on that thread wasn’t about foreshadowing solutions but problems. additionally I disagree with your definition of foreshadowing. It can happen anywhere...
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    Are there some gays who are homophobic?

    Well it depends if you consider hating political gayness as homophobia. there is character trait of gayness and then there’s the lgbt movement of which there are definitely gay people who find great disdain of.
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    Writing [Tutorial] Plotting: The Murphy's Law Method

    What about foreshadowing? In the same manner of how solutions for problems shouldn't come out of no where (Deus Ex Machina). Problems also shouldn't always be unpredictable. Perhaps something like (difficultates ex Deo). You can have the wheel fall off your wagon if you need a reason for it to...
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    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    These questions might've already been asked, but I don't feel like reading five pages of people having an in-depth discussion of sentence punctuation. So, what about when multiple characters are acting in unision? [The two calmed down. "Yes sir."] Without dialogue tags [The two replied. "Yes...
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    I think its called shotgun boy or something similar.

    I think its called shotgun boy or something similar.
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    Reminds me of an art teacher who talked about how he would often be tempted to through away his...

    Reminds me of an art teacher who talked about how he would often be tempted to through away his art because he could only see the imperfections.
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    Have you read the prequel series?

    Have you read the prequel series?
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    How ironic is it that when the U.S. government burns twenty plus children from Waco Texas alive...

    How ironic is it that when the U.S. government burns twenty plus children from Waco Texas alive (in minecraft) its normal, but when I (not in minecraft)
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    Is this cover too boring?

    You're current cover is very professional, and much better than the waifu trash that all looks the same. What I mean by that is, I could see finding a book with a cover your cover at barnes & noble or other retailers. In terms of attracting attention to your work though, I can't really say, as...
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    Do you write when you're depressed?

    For me no, when I'm depressed I don't have any creative energy.
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    Illegal or Legal.

    I doubt it, As I've yet to hear about people getting sued by disney for tattoo's of marvel, or starwars.
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    Does chapter size matter?

    Aren't you the guy that makes 10k+ chapters?
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    "I just thought up some line I think is cool, better find a way to post it without people...

    "I just thought up some line I think is cool, better find a way to post it without people thinking I just made it up to look cool."
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