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After thinking about it, I'd love your opinion on chapter 9 or 11 of Gates. I have other grotesque scenes, but I haven't published them yet. :blob_sir: Book Name/Link Embed The Gate of Shadows Scene/Chapter to be reviewed: Chapter 9: Agony or Chapter 11: Blood Ritual Explain the scene and...

The Shadows Within Or The Gate of Shadows Thank you for your time, friend!

Oh, another! There are so many feedback threads! Hahah! Thank you for your time, friend! The Shadows Within Or The Gate of Shadows

:blob_sir: Another feedback thread, gosh darn it! There are so many people to tear me up anew! Unsure if you are already full but well, I submit~ The Shadows Within Or The Gate of Shadows

:blob_sir: I submit as a sacrifice. Thank you for your time~ The Shadows Within Or The Gate of Shadows

:blob_no: Yeti review. One day, I hope!

Is it wrong to say I can barely follow your style of writing? :blob_pat_sad: It's more than just the extra detail in the fight scenes. I'll try to help, but maybe your style isn't for me. You switch from present to past tenses; when I say a lot, I mean a lot. Usually, in writing, you stick to a...

I would love your opinion on either of these two stories. Don't have to sugarcoat anything; I'm just looking for areas to improve. Thank you for your time! This is my newest story: The Shadows Within This is my old one rewritten: The Gate of Shadows

:blob_melt: I don't mind as long as it helps me get better.~ Nothing will rip me anew like you did, though.:blob_aww: So, Blob sensei, I will give it a shot!

Emotional scenes I write tend to get me teary eye while I write and reread them. My readers tell me I'm pretty good at bringing out emotions from them, so perhaps that's why. When I write, I place myself in the character's shoes, allowing myself to feel what they feel. It allows you to show and...

I am tempted. :blob_hide:

:blob_pat_sad: I'm so slow~

Reread and edit your story. It should flow back to you as you do so. If not, move on to other stories and return when you feel like it!