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  1. Daydreamers

    writing my first original novel here , wanted to hear opinions on it.

    Ooh , I assumed since the tone is dark... nvm, well the only path to improvement is honesty, we can't spare his/her soul even if still a newborn
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    Who is the strongest cringelord?

    absolutely , to the ears of an idiot even a joke is cringe,
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    writing my first original novel here , wanted to hear opinions on it.

    I've read a little bit of the first chapter like half, I would say writing wise , it's good , easy to follow, but the logic is a bit lacking, a starving child who hasn't eaten for seven days should be weak and barely able to speak, let alone have the energy to recount his backstory. Also, why is...
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    Lemmino is ?

    Lemmino is ?
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    Educate me about Guns

    I know this isn't what you want, but never write a story you have no idea about, it will get boring and you'll abondon it eventually because it will require a lot of effort and research, instead pick something that resonates with you well,
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    it was worth a try, well goodnight, I let you all win this time
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    please give him your taste buds, the lack of, is driving him crazy comparing the previous cow to the current garbage, how dare he say either way :blob_teary:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    don't you have a tongue?
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    a cow was better
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    where is the cow? you lost your identity :blob_teary:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I never claimed anyone as a jerk, history is just history, only fools get emotionally attached to it and you're mixing things up a bit, during WW1 the UK and France made a deal with the Arabs in the Middle East to divide the Ottoman Empire, but they didn’t keep their promise. Instead, both the...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Absolutely not, there were no rewards, it's because of their inability to keep up, and also the UN
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    naah they were too busy controlling africa, the fact that not a single country gained independence during WW2 is mind-blowing
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    Do games have to be fun?

    Games need to be stimulating.
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    What Attracts You In A Book?

    Tags =>first chapter, if I like the first scene I continue if not I check the synopsis to know its potential, I prefer going in blind (ofc there are exceptions)
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    @Decaded thank you

    @Decaded thank you
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    @Decaded don't quote someone rich, it's about time they stop dictating our lives

    @Decaded don't quote someone rich, it's about time they stop dictating our lives
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    @Valmond No, I was too lazy and irresponsible to think of a back up. I guess this is a lesson

    @Valmond No, I was too lazy and irresponsible to think of a back up. I guess this is a lesson
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    My laptop crashed and I lost everything, well if this isn't god telling me to quit idk what is

    My laptop crashed and I lost everything, well if this isn't god telling me to quit idk what is
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    @Envylope thnks, I remember the title was the main reason I never watched it

    @Envylope thnks, I remember the title was the main reason I never watched it
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